# Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

> Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole.

Recently, more and more people try to become vegetarian. People start to believe that eating only vegetables will make people healthier and will do good to our earth. I don't agree with it completely becasue I disagree most of the main supporting reasons of why people should become vegetarian.

It is said that vegetables contain all the protein we needed. Moreover, since comparing to meat, it's easier for our body to digest vegetables, eating vegetables make things easier for our digestive system. I don't agree with this statement because meat always contains more types of portein compared to vegetables. If someone wants to get the same protein as eating beef, s/he may have to eat more than five kinds of vegatables, which is impossible for people to follow daily. The second reason why I disagree is because human are born omnivorous. The body system is naturally built for consuming both meat and vegetables. Eating vegetables is good for our health; however, it does not naturally suit human diet.

The Second main argument is that people state that aquaculture is harming the earth enviorment, and thus we should stop eating meat to save the enviorment. I partially agree that aquaculture really does damage to the enviorment. Nevertheless, I don't agree that people can save the earth simply by not eating meat. Over the last 2000 years,our ancestors have such success because whenever they encounter problems they will solve the problem with an innovative way or a new technology, not by getting rid of the old habits. We should reduce carbon dioxide produced by aquaculture activities by coming up with new strategies or using other technologies. Therefore, I don't think people should become vegetarian only because they want to save the enviorment.

In conclusion, although becoming vegetarian is a popular trend nowadays, I don't think poeple should follow it blindly. People should do more homework and find out what type of diet suits them the best.

1. use different verbs: avoid words like say(declare, believe, argue, state), happy(thrilled, excited, delighted), people(residents, customers, students)
2. I improve my English by reading more English novels and/or (by) watching more English TV movies.
the sentence structure has to be equal when you use and/ or
3. try to think: is this sentence necessary? What's the purpose of this sentence? If the essay sounds the same when you omit a sentence, don't put the sentence down.
4. don't use so or but (informal)
so: ,and thus ;thus ,therefore
but: however, nevertheless, whereas
5. spelling mistakes

## Structure
People's view

meat have Multiple protein is more than vagetable

Aquaculture really do harm to our earth.
Burn not your house to frighten the mouse away

## Ｍistake
if the noun is countable
"but" is not a formal way try to use however
use "therefore"
perception 認知
perspective 觀點

argue/ state / believe / say /