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tags: commission, apsci, rp, miki, sabersMyopia, anzu, crimsonSpearkisser, rtil
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# Rtil Anzu/Miki (Choking) Sketch Commission

## Summary
One doll (Miki/"Sayaka") kneeling atop another (Anzu/"Kyoko"), using the back of a *very* large blade to pin her by the neck and choke her out.

## General
* **Vibe:** Confrontational on Miki's end, weakly defiant on Anzu's.
* **Pose:** Generally like [this][pose-strangling], though with some differences.
* **Miki:** On top, using the back (flat) of her blade to press down on Anzu's neck. (See notes in **Other** regarding weapon and clothing.)
* Her expression doesn't have to be visible, necessarily; it's nice, but Anzu's expression is more important.
* Her **right hand** (the rotting one) should be on the *blade of her sword* to apply pressure (it's 'dead', it doesn't feel pain the same way, and isn't so easy to cut); her other hand should be applying pressure using the hilt.
* **Anzu:** Limbs **aren't** curled up in the air like they are in the reference!
* The idea is for her to be sort of half-heartedly resisting; she's angry about it, but also getting off on it, all while steadily losing consciousness.
* **Figure:** As per the refs for [Anzu][anzu-rtil-mgirl] and [Miki][miki-rtil-okt] you've done in the past. Some reminders:
* **Anzu:**
* Not as thin as Miki - human proportions (so as you drew her last time). Gem-like irises.
* **Miki:**
* Thin, kind of spindly limbs; doll-like proportions.
* Rotten eye is sort of like a glassy, milky, faintly glowing 'pearl'. The creepy looking blue parts on her body are decaying, and suffering rigor mortis. (So they're stiff and hard to move.)

### Body
* **Expression:**
* **Anzu:** Blushing, struggling to keep looking *angry* instead of woozy or turned on/flustered.
* **Miki:** Severely annoyed; she's not doing this for sexual reasons.

### Other
* **Clothing:**
* **Miki:** If her cape would obstruct the view too much, feel free to get rid of it. (Or even have it tossed off to the side in a sort of "I *knew* I'd have to get my hands dirty" gesture!)
* **Weapon:**
* **Miki:** Basically, a combination of [what you drew][miki-rtil-okt] and [the weapon Sayaka has here][sayaka-weapon-buster]. (Ideally, with the length of [the other design][sayaka-form-witch] I mention below.)
* The idea is to evoke the image of something that, while still Sayaka's, is used more through brute force, taking advantage of the weapon's *weight* instead of finesse.
* It's important that the blade have one flat side (instead of both being sharp).
* _**If** you think it'd be more interesting_, feel free to throw in design elements from [this][sayaka-form-witch] sword (really, it's more like a cleaver)!

## Reference Material
*Here for system reasons.*

[anzu-rtil-mgirl]: http://refs.indulgen.se/madoka/kyoko_sakura/crimsonSpearkisser/art/~/rtil/midna-kyoko-anzu-sakura.png

[miki-rtil-okt]: http://refs.indulgen.se/madoka/sayaka_miki/sabersMyopia/art/~/rtil/midna-sayaka.png

[sayaka-form-witch]: http://refs.indulgen.se/madoka/sayaka_miki/sabersMyopia/art/witch/form/25401962_p0.jpg
[sayaka-weapon-buster]: http://refs.indulgen.se/madoka/sayaka_miki/sabersMyopia/art/inspiration/62544785_p0.png

[pose-strangling]: http://refs.indulgen.se/etc/inspiration/art/pose/strangling/man-woman-adult-athletic-white-fist-fight-laying-poses-casual-couple-choke-pose-a_640v640rpoD.jpg