Rtil Anzu/Miki (Choking) Sketch Commission

Summary

One doll (Miki/"Sayaka") kneeling atop another (Anzu/"Kyoko"), using the back of a very large blade to pin her by the neck and choke her out.

General

• Vibe: Confrontational on Miki's end, weakly defiant on Anzu's.
• Pose: Generally like this, though with some differences.
  • Miki: On top, using the back (flat) of her blade to press down on Anzu's neck. (See notes in Other regarding weapon and clothing.)
    • Her expression doesn't have to be visible, necessarily; it's nice, but Anzu's expression is more important.
    • Her right hand (the rotting one) should be on the blade of her sword to apply pressure (it's 'dead', it doesn't feel pain the same way, and isn't so easy to cut); her other hand should be applying pressure using the hilt.
  • Anzu: Limbs aren't curled up in the air like they are in the reference!
    • The idea is for her to be sort of half-heartedly resisting; she's angry about it, but also getting off on it, all while steadily losing consciousness.
• Figure: As per the refs for Anzu and Miki you've done in the past. Some reminders:
  • Anzu:
    • Not as thin as Miki - human proportions (so as you drew her last time). Gem-like irises.
  • Miki:
    • Thin, kind of spindly limbs; doll-like proportions.
    • Rotten eye is sort of like a glassy, milky, faintly glowing 'pearl'. The creepy looking blue parts on her body are decaying, and suffering rigor mortis. (So they're stiff and hard to move.)

Body

• Expression:
  • Anzu: Blushing, struggling to keep looking angry instead of woozy or turned on/flustered.
  • Miki: Severely annoyed; she's not doing this for sexual reasons.

Other

• Clothing:
  • Miki: If her cape would obstruct the view too much, feel free to get rid of it. (Or even have it tossed off to the side in a sort of "I knew I'd have to get my hands dirty" gesture!)
• Weapon:
  • Miki: Basically, a combination of what you drew and the weapon Sayaka has here. (Ideally, with the length of the other design I mention below.)
    • The idea is to evoke the image of something that, while still Sayaka's, is used more through brute force, taking advantage of the weapon's weight instead of finesse.
    • It's important that the blade have one flat side (instead of both being sharp).
    • If you think it'd be more interesting, feel free to throw in design elements from this sword (really, it's more like a cleaver)!

Reference Material

Here for system reasons.