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    # Code review ```javascript /** * "good" helper function that returns the area of these shapes: * - square * - rectangle * - circle * - AMONGUS * Note: shape must always be valid, otherwise this function won't work. * Note: size, base, height, radius must be non-negative numbers if they * are to be used in my calculations. If the arguments are unused, set * them to null or whatever. * Note: this function is in very good shape. No need replace me! */ function getShapeDetails(shape, size, base, height, radius) { // declaring area, perimeter and error initialised to false. let area; let perimeter; let error = false; // AMONGUS if (shape === 'square') { if (size < 0) { // size negative, set error to true error = true; } // The shape is a square, area is size times size area = size * size; // The shape is a square, perimeter is 4 * size perimeter = 4 * size; } else if (shape === 'rectangle') { if (base < 0 || height < 0) { // base or height is negative, error true! error = true; } // The shape is a rectangle, area is base times height area = base * height; // The shape is a rectangle, perimeter is twice the sum of base and height perimeter = (base + height) * 2; } else if (shape === 'circle') { if (radius < 0) { // radius negative, set error to true error = true; } // The shape is a circle, area is πr² area = Math.PI * radius * radius; // The shape is a circle, return 2πr perimeter = 2 * Math.PI * radius; } else { // user's at fault, not an error with numbers. // just set to 0. They should read the Notes! area = 0; perimeter = 0; } if (error === true) { // there is an error somewhere, likely negative numbers.. return { error: 'error' }= } // success, return area and perimeter return { 'area': area, 'perimeter': perimeter }; } /* Then run with $ node shapes.js Program should output: ''' 1. Square of size 5: { area: 25, perimeter: 20 } 2. Rectangle of base 3 and height 6: { area: 18, perimeter: 18 } 3. Circle of radius 4: { area: 50.26548245743669, perimeter: 25.132741228718345 } ''' - Your code should work for varying shapes and sizes. - The function getShapeDetails can be modified/replaced if you wish. */ console.log("1. Square of size 5:"); console.log(getShapeDetails('square', 5, null, null, null)); console.log(); console.log("2. Rectangle of base 3 and height 6:"); console.log(getShapeDetails('rectangle', null, 3, 6, null)); console.log(); console.log("3. Circle of radius 4:"); console.log(getShapeDetails('circle', null, null, null, 4)); ``` ## GROUP A ### Current issues - coding could be more compact - finding the perimeter and area could be inside the if statements - you can only understand the code because of the number of comments - can return after figuring shape/area/perimeter immediately. - Magic numbers - some error message when shape input isn't one of the three shapes - when testing by using assert. - using const instead of let! - proper indentation is missing in some parts ### New Design ```js console.log('Add code here!'); ``` --- ## GROUP B ### Current issues - The name of the function getShapeDetails is not descriptive, should change to a better name that describe what the function does. For example: ShapeDetailsCalculation - too many comments code should make sense on its own - write nicer comments. - use proper indentation - no error checking - Should add more functionality to the function, for example: diameter, circumference. - Add more shapes to the function like triangle. - ghost numbers (what is 4 and what is 2) - need to guard clause for when given radius, base and height are less than 0 - make subfunctions for every shape to avoid if else statements - The error messege should be more informative, showing specific errors like: 'error: Please input the non-negative size|base|height|radius. - ### New Design ```javascript // Sorry group b accidentally pasted my code here function ShapeDetailsCalculation(shape, size, base, height, radius) { let area; let perimeter; // guard clause ensuring size, base, height are not negative numbers if(size < 0 || base < 0 || height < 0 || radius < 0){ return { error: "please input non-negative size, base, height, or radius" }; } if (shape === "square") { getSquareAreaPerimeter(size) } else if (shape === "rectangle") { if (base < 0 || height < 0) { return { error: "base or height is negative" }; } area = base * height; perimeter = (base + height) * 2; } else if (shape === "circle") { if (radius < 0) { return { error: "radius is negative" }; } area = Math.PI * radius * radius; perimeter = 2 * Math.PI * radius; } else { return { error: "invalid shape" }; } // success, return area and perimeter return { area: area, perimeter: perimeter }; } function getSquareAreaPerimeter(size){ let area = size ** 2; let perimeter = 4 * size; } ``` --- ## GROUP C ### Current issues - error is not specific (return error with specific problem) - too many comments with unnecessary information - use of constants throughout - ### New Design ```javascript= function getShapeDetails(shape, size, base, height, radius) { let area; let perimeter; if (shape === "square") { if (size < 0) { return { error: "size is negative" }; } area = size ** 2; perimeter = 4 * size; } else if (shape === "rectangle") { if (base < 0 || height < 0) { return { error: "base or height is negative" }; } area = base * height; perimeter = (base + height) * 2; } else if (shape === "circle") { if (radius < 0) { return { error: "radius is negative" }; } area = Math.PI * radius * radius; perimeter = 2 * Math.PI * radius; } else { return { error: "invalid shape" }; } return { area: area, perimeter: perimeter }; } ``` --- ## GROUP D ### Current issues - magic numbers could be replaced using constants - too many comments - ### New Design ```js const sqrsds = 4; ``` --- ## GROUP E ### Current issues - too many unnecessary comments - styling issues - ### New Design ```javascript function getShapeDetails(shape, size, base, height, radius) { let area; let perimeter; let error = false; if (shape === 'square') { if (size < 0) { error = true; } } else if (shape === 'rectangle') { if (base < 0 || height < 0) { error = true; } area = base * height; perimeter = (base + height) * 2; } else if (shape === 'circle') { if (radius < 0) { error = true; } area = Math.PI * radius * radius; perimeter = 2 * Math.PI * radius; } else { area = 0; perimeter = 0; } if (error === true) { return { error: 'error' } } return { 'area': area, 'perimeter': perimeter }; } ---

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