# Fast-food restaurant discussion
More and more schools allow fast-food restaurants to sell their products to their students.
Is it a positive or negative development?
## Structure
Fast-food may harm health. however, many thing do harm to our health either.
sleep late, cigarette, alcohol, Lo mei ... etc. Should we abandon them all from our life? definatlly not.
what we should learn is how to balance our meal, not just throw them away if they do any harm to us reather any other good they bring to us.
Fast-food is convenience, tasty, and it's another choice for meal.
my oppinient of fast food
for our self
for the school
concrution
## Article
We can see more and more fast-food restaurants in campus nowadays. People are debating whether fast food appearing in campus is good or bad for the students. Personally, I think fast food appearing in campus is good for the students . One reason is related to restaurants in schools and the other is related to students themselves.
One reason is that the goal of school restaurants is to let students have cheap and diverse meals they can choose from as if they were dining out of campus. If there are always only few kinds of meals for students to choose from, students will get tired of the food provided at school and will eventually start dining outside of campus. In this case, school restaurants will lose their main target market, which is the large group of hungry students. Moreover, even if schools ban the selling of fast food, students can still consume fast food by dining outside of campus, which makes the banning pointless.
The other reason is that fast-food restaurants are also beneficial to students' daily lives. Fast food is convenient, tasty, and there are many kinds of fast food. Students can still buy a meal even if they are in a rush. Also, they can have a nice chat with snacks like fried chickens or fries in a cheap price rather than going to a pricy bar. It's also a good choice if someone wants to buy something for his or friend who is having a hard time dealing with their exams or school work.
Without a doubt, fast food is less healthier than other kinds of food. However, I think how to eat healthy and balanced is a lesson we all need to learn. We should figure out our best diets by ourselves rather than having a rule to keep us away from a certain kind of food. Considering the two reasons I have mentioned above, I think allowing more fast-food restaurants to sell their products in schools is a positive development. I agree that fast food brings advantages to students' lives and eating habits.Therefore, fast-food restaurant should be allowed to sell their products in campus.
## Mistake
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## Version 2
We can see more and more fast-food restaurants in campus nowadays. People are debating whether fast food appearing in campus is good or bad for the students. Personally, I think fast food appearing in campus is good for students, because banning fast food in schools doesn't seem to have any benifits for both students and school.
The first debet is that some people say that schools should control students' diets in order to keep them healthy, while the other group of people think students should have their own freeodom to decide what to eat. I think how to eat healthy and balanced is a lesson we all need to learn. We should figure out our best diets by ourselves rather than having a rule to keep us away from a certain kind of food. Moreover, if schools ban the selling of fast food, students who wants to have fast food can still consume fast food by dining outside of campus, which makes the banning pointless. In this case, students don't necessarily eat healthier. The goal of school restaurants should be helping students eat in school with a cheaper price and eat more conveniently.
The other reason is that fast food is suitable for student lifestyle. There are many satiations where students might want to have fast food. Sometimes, students might be in a rush and might want to buy a meal between classes. They might want to have a place where they can spend their afternoon time by chatting with friends while having a snack. It's also a good choice if someone wants to buy something for his or her friends who are having a hard time dealing with their exams or school work. Considering the satuations I have mentioned above, it's easy to see that the fast food is suitable for student lifestyle.
Considering the two reasons I have mentioned above, I think allowing more fast-food restaurants to sell their products in schools is a positive development. I agree that fast food brings advantages to students' lives and bring more convenience.Therefore, fast-food restaurants should be allowed to sell their products in campus.
## Mistake
If you use "debet" you have to write the both side of argument
May 30% chance
Might 60% chance
I like Tomy; however, my best friend also likes Tomy.
I don't like animals; therefore, I don't like to go to the zoo.