# Week 2 task

Original paragraph
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Everybody knows about the threat of global warming to our earth. We all pollute the atmosphere with gases and we all throw away rubbish that could be recycled. Can we solve these problems? As far as I am concerned, these are two aspects that can be improved. I believe that everyone should use more public transport and leave their car at home. I also think that we can all learn to recycle more of our plastic and glass bottles. Even our left-over food can be used as compost.
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Final version:
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Due to the vehicle emission, unsorted rubbish disposal, and other anthropogenic activities, global warming has posed a considerable threat to our earth. To alleviate this problem, some improvement should be executed. First, taking public transportation helps reduce gas release. Second, learning to recycle more plastic and glass bottles could help reduce the amount of trash. Lastly, using left-over food as compost could save reusable resources. If these changes are made, the rate of global warming may be slowed down.
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鄒宇軒r10541126改寫的:
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Due to the vehicles emission, unsorted rubbish disposal, and other anthropogenic activities, global warming has posed a considerable threat. As a result, some improvement should be executed. First, taking public transportations should have priority over driving own cars. Second, recycling plastic and glass bottles and using left-over food as compost should be well implemented.
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林家蓉r11429002改寫的:
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Releasing gases to the atmosphere and throwing away rubbish that could be recycled create the threat of global warming to earth. To alleviate the problem, there are some suggested alternatives. First, taking public transportation helps reduce gas release. Second, learning to recycle more plastic and glass bottles could help reduce the amount of trash. Lastly, using left-over food as compost could save reusable resources. If these changes are made, the rate of global warming may be slowed down.
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林敬翔r10525103改寫的:
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Polluting the atmosphere with gases, throwing away recyclable rubbish, and other anthropogenic activities are some reasons that cause the threat of global warming. To alleviate this issue, the student proposes three suggestions. First, people should take public transport. Second, plastic and glass bottles should be recycled. Third, left-over food should be used as compost.
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陳維哲r09643008改寫的:
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The threat of global warming to our earth is a pressing concern to most publics. Gases that pollute the atmosphere and rubbish without being recycled are the important factors to deteriorate this problem. Two solutions are proposed to ameliorate this condition. First, people should use more public transport instead of driving their own cars. Second, people should learn to recycle recyclables, such as plastic, glass bottles, and even left-over food.
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許荃伊 r10525120 改寫的:
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Global warming is getting worse. Especially, human activities, such as exhausting emission and failing to sort garbage, have accelerated the rate of global warming. To alleviate this problem, people should use more public transport to reduce the exhausting emission, and learn recycle plastic and glass bottles to increase the cycle of carbon. Even using left-over food as compost can alleviate the rate of global warming.
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