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# Jeremy 中級複試課程

![Screenshot 2024-09-13 at 21.46.49](https://hackmd.io/_uploads/BJr8fpZpA.png)

# 第一回

* 口說音檔Part 2 - https://media.ivy.com.tw/GEPTIntermediate235d49e7c9b30be6028e5149475dbe27d/041-051/
* 口說音檔Part 3 - https://media.ivy.com.tw/GEPTIntermediate235d49e7c9b30be6028e5149475dbe27d/052/ 



| 日期 | 上課進度                              | 批改       | 訂正    |
| ---- | ------------------------------------- | ---------- | --- |
| 9/13 | U1 口說：Part 1-Part 2 & 寫作：Part 1 | 作文Part 2 |  OK   |
| 9/20 | U1 口說：Part2 & U2 寫作 | 完成批改 |  OK   |
| 9/27 | U3 寫作 | 完成批改 |  待繳交   |


# 口說筆記

以下單字，必須要多加練習發音：

![Screenshot 2024-09-13 at 21.45.18](https://hackmd.io/_uploads/BkjlfpZaA.png)

 
# 1. Do you prefer to swim in the pool or in the ocean? 

* The ocean can be quite **unpredictable**. (不可預測)
* For example, people can be attacked by sharks or **jellyfish**.(水母)
* And the weather can also change swiftly with storms and strong winds.

# 2. Do you like to tickle your family members or friends ?

* I don't do tickling with my family. 
* The main reason is that I know they will not like it. 
* Sometimes, they might even get mad at me and  feel irritated.


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# 作業：練習第三部分 -看圖敘述

![Screenshot 2024-09-13 at 21.59.07](https://hackmd.io/_uploads/BJQrSTWaC.png)

![Screenshot 2024-09-13 at 21.59.58](https://hackmd.io/_uploads/rypPSTWT0.png)


# Do you like to take the bus?

I don't like taking the bus because the weather is very hot, and I have to wait for a long time. Sometimes, the bus driver drives too fast without paying attention to safety and even has road rage. 路怒症



# 參考答案
This image shows a bustling urban bus stop, likely in a city, with several people waiting for their buses. A large bus with the route number "178-U7" is parked at the stop, and more buses can be seen further down the road. People are standing and sitting on benches, many of them appearing calm and patient, while some seem to be checking their phones or bags. Most of the individuals are wearing masks, suggesting the photo was taken during a time when COVID-19 precautions were in place. Tall buildings line the background, highlighting the busy, urban environment.



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# 第一回翻譯題

滿分：38/40，整體寫作完整，文法正確，僅有小細節需要注意拼字。

![Screenshot 2024-09-13 at 22.07.02](https://hackmd.io/_uploads/r1GzD6bpA.png)


![Screenshot 2024-09-13 at 22.10.16](https://hackmd.io/_uploads/r1P0vaZTC.png)
### 參考答案：
Taking out the trash is David’s job. Every day at 8 p.m., he gathers the household garbage and walks to the sidewalk to wait for the garbage truck. But one day, David got so absorbed in playing video games that he lost track of time. By the time he heard the garbage truck’s music, it was already 8:05 p.m., and he **had no choice but to run（不得不.... + to V)** after the truck as it was leaving. 


# 第一回作文


![Screenshot 2024-09-13 at 22.11.02](https://hackmd.io/_uploads/ByM-d6WpC.png)

### 參考答案：

More and more people today prefer watching videos on online video-sharing websites instead of television. These websites are popular for several reasons. First, they offer a wide variety of content that can be watched anytime, anywhere. Second, viewers can skip advertisements and find videos that match their personal interests. Finally, these platforms allow people to interact by liking, sharing, and commenting on videos, making the experience more engaging.

Personally, I enjoy watching educational videos on these sites. I love learning new things, whether it's about science, history, or technology. These videos are short, easy to understand, and packed with useful information. Watching them helps me expand my knowledge in a fun and accessible way.




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![Screenshot 2024-09-13 at 22.14.56](https://hackmd.io/_uploads/rkA1Kp-TA.png)

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**評語：**

1. **內容：**
   - 你很好地回答了第一個問題，解釋了為什麼影片分享網站受歡迎，並且提到了其彈性和個人化推薦系統。
   - 你也清楚地描述了你喜歡的影片類型（機械和DIY影片），並解釋了它們如何幫助你學習新技能，這符合第二個問題的要求。

2. **組織：**
   - 文章有明確的結構，首先解釋了平台受歡迎的原因，接著講述了個人喜好，這讓文章的流暢性很好。

3. **文法和用字遣詞：**
   - **文法上**，一些細微的錯誤可以改善，例如：
     - “increasngly” 應該是 “increasingly”。
     - “contal” 應該是 “control”。
     - “recommendations based on your interest” 建議改為 “recommendations based on the viewer's interests” 來保持文法一致。
   
   - **句子清晰度** 可以稍作調整，比如：
     - “Like me, I enjoy watching…” 建議改成 “Personally, I enjoy watching…” 以避免句子重複自指，讓表達更自然。

4. **標點符號：**
   - 文章中使用的標點符號大致正確，但可以稍加留意細節。例如，“anytime and anywhere”後的逗號可以去掉，因為這是一個連接詞語。

5. **字數：**

   - 原本字數，不足120 字，大概約有86，需要再多增加內容長度。

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**修改建議：**

1. **第一段修改建議：**
   - 原句：“Video sharing platforms are increasngly popular because they allow people to watch content anytime and anywhere, and give us many movies, shows, and videos.”
   - 修改後：“Video sharing platforms are increasingly popular because they allow people to watch content anytime, anywhere, and offer a wide variety of movies, shows, and videos.”

2. **第二段修改建議：**
   - 原句：“Unlike traditional TV, these platforms give viewers more contal over what and when they watch.”
   - 修改後：“Unlike traditional TV, these platforms give viewers more control over what they watch and when they watch it.”

3. **第三段修改建議：**
   - 原句：“Like me, I enjoy watching videos about machinery and DIY projects. Machinery videos fascinate me with their detailed technical aspects, and DIY videos help me learn new skills and create things with my hands.”
   - 修改後：“Personally, I enjoy watching videos about machinery and DIY projects. Machinery videos fascinate me with their detailed technical aspects, while DIY videos help me learn new skills and create things with my hands.”

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**最終版本：**

Video sharing platforms are increasingly popular because they allow people to watch content anytime, anywhere, and offer a wide variety of movies, shows, and videos. Unlike traditional TV, these platforms give viewers more control over what they watch and when they watch it. They also offer personalized recommendations based on the viewer's interests. Personally, I enjoy watching videos about machinery and DIY projects. Machinery videos fascinate me with their detailed technical aspects, while DIY videos help me learn new skills and create things with my hands.

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### 參考答案（字數：120）

Video sharing platforms are increasingly popular because they allow people to watch content anytime, anywhere. These platforms offer a vast collection of movies, shows, and videos that cater to different tastes. Unlike traditional TV, which is restricted by schedules, viewers on these platforms can choose what they want to watch at any time. Another advantage is that these platforms provide personalized recommendations based on the viewer's watching habits and preferences, making the experience more enjoyable and tailored.

Personally, I enjoy watching videos about machinery and DIY projects. Machinery videos are fascinating because they dive into detailed technical aspects, explaining how various machines work. DIY videos, on the other hand, are practical and help me learn new skills. They inspire me to create things with my hands, such as building simple tools or crafting decorations. These videos not only entertain me but also teach me useful knowledge that I can apply in real life.

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這篇作文能獲得高分的原因主要在於以下幾個方面：

### 1. **內容完整且緊扣題目**
   - 作文針對題目中的兩個問題給出了清晰且具體的回答：第一部分詳細解釋了影片分享平台受歡迎的原因，第二部分表達了個人的觀影喜好，並解釋了為什麼喜歡這些類型的影片。
   - 作文展現了作者對影片分享平台的功能、優勢，以及這些平台如何滿足用戶需求的深刻理解，內容豐富且充實。

### 2. **組織結構清晰**
   - 全文按照題目提示進行分段討論，每一段都圍繞一個主要思想展開。第一段講解影片分享平台的普及原因，第二段則具體描述了作者個人的影片偏好，結構分明，邏輯連貫。
   - 每段內部句子之間有自然的過渡和聯繫，使文章在閱讀時感覺流暢，條理清晰。

### 3. **語法準確**
   - 作文中的語法幾乎無錯誤，展示了較高的語法掌握能力。例如，正確使用了複雜的句子結構，如「Unlike traditional TV, which is restricted by schedules, viewers on these platforms can choose what they want to watch at any time」。
   - 另外，像“provide personalized recommendations based on the viewer's watching habits and preferences”這樣的句子，展示了高水平的詞彙使用及語法結構的靈活運用。

### 4. **詞彙豐富**
   - 作文中使用了豐富且多樣化的詞彙，如 “vast collection,” “cater to,” “tailored experience,” “detailed technical aspects” 等，使文章顯得專業而且成熟，避免了簡單詞彙的重複使用，提升了文章的質感。
   - 對影片的描述也很具體，如“DIY videos inspire me to create things with my hands, such as building simple tools or crafting decorations”，不僅僅是表面上的描述，還深入探討了DIY影片對作者生活的具體影響。

### 5. **表達深刻**
   - 這篇作文不僅僅停留在表面事實的陳述上，更展現了個人對影片分享平台的思考和反思，體現了作者對主題的深入理解。特別是最後一段，將影片的技術細節和實際應用結合，提升了文章的深度。
   - 這樣的深入討論和個性化的觀點使文章比僅僅敘述影片分享平台功能的文章更具說服力，也更能打動評分者。

### 6. **符合字數要求**
   - 最終修改後的作文字數達到要求，沒有過多或不足，顯示了作者能夠在有限的字數範圍內完成表達，並且不拖泥帶水，這在考試中是非常重要的。

### 總結：
這篇作文通過清晰的結構、豐富的詞彙、準確的語法，以及深刻的內容展示了作者對題目的充分理解。這些優點使得文章不僅流暢易讀，而且表達了個人獨特的觀點和見解，因此具備獲得高分的潛力。





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# 不錯的句型和單字

#### 1. **高級詞彙**

- **Vast collection**：龐大的收藏，適合用來描述內容種類繁多的情況。
  - *例句*: “Netflix offers a vast collection of movies, shows, and documentaries.”
  
- **Cater to**：迎合，滿足特定群體的需求。
  - *例句*: “The restaurant's menu caters to both vegetarians and meat lovers.”

- **Tailored experience**：量身定制的體驗，形容符合個人需求的服務。
  - *例句*: “The app provides a tailored experience based on your preferences.”

- **Detailed technical aspects**：詳細的技術方面，常用於描述與科技或工程相關的內容。
  - *例句*: “The tutorial explains the detailed technical aspects of coding.”

- **Personalized recommendations**：個性化推薦，用來形容系統根據使用者偏好推薦內容的功能。
  - *例句*: “YouTube gives personalized recommendations based on your viewing history.”

- **Fascinate**：使...著迷，描述對某物有強烈的興趣。
  - *例句*: “Space exploration fascinates me because of its endless possibilities.”

- **Practical and useful knowledge**：實用的知識，指的是能在生活中應用的知識。
  - *例句*: “The course offers practical and useful knowledge for everyday life.”

#### 2. **常用高級句型**

- **Not only... but also...**：不僅...而且...
  - *例句*: “This platform not only offers a wide variety of content, but also provides personalized recommendations.”

- **Unlike...**：與...不同，用來進行對比。
  - *例句*: “Unlike traditional TV, streaming platforms allow viewers to watch shows anytime they want.”

- **Personally, I enjoy...**：個人而言，我喜歡...，用來表達個人觀點。
  - *例句*: “Personally, I enjoy reading science fiction novels because they stimulate my imagination.”

- **Another advantage is...**：另一個優點是...，用來列舉多個優點。
  - *例句*: “Another advantage of online education is the flexibility to study at your own pace.”

- **These platforms offer viewers more control over...**：這些平台讓觀眾對...有更多的掌控權，描述互聯網平台的優勢。
  - *例句*: “These platforms offer viewers more control over what they watch and when they watch it.”

- **The content not only entertains but also educates...**：內容不僅娛樂而且教育，形容內容有雙重作用。
  - *例句*: “The documentary not only entertains but also educates the audience on environmental issues.”

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### **練習題目**

#### **題目一：**
請寫一篇 120 字左右的文章，描述一個你常使用的手機應用程式，解釋為什麼它對你很有幫助。你可以使用以下句型和單字來豐富你的表達：
- 使用 **vast collection** 來形容應用程式中的內容種類。
- 使用 **personalized recommendations** 來描述應用如何根據你的偏好推薦內容。
- 使用 **Another advantage is...** 列出應用的另一個優點。
- 使用 **Not only... but also...** 強調該應用的多重功能。

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#### **題目二：**
寫一篇 150 字左右的短文，討論為什麼你認為網路學習比傳統課堂更具優勢。你可以參考以下句型：
- 使用 **Unlike...** 對比傳統學習與網路學習。
- 使用 **These platforms offer... more control over...** 來描述學習平台的彈性。
- 使用 **tailored experience** 和 **practical and useful knowledge** 來形容網路學習的優勢。
- 使用 **Personally, I enjoy...** 表達你對網路學習的個人看法。

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#### **題目三：**
描述一次你看過的影片或影集，說明它為什麼讓你印象深刻，並討論影片的優點。可以使用：
- **Detailed technical aspects** 來描述影片中的技術細節或製作優點。
- **Fascinate** 來表達影片讓你著迷的原因。
- **Not only... but also...** 來強調影片的娛樂和教育價值。
- **Personally, I enjoy...** 用於描述你個人的觀影偏好。



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# 參考範例

### 題目一：手機應用程式的好處

One mobile app I frequently use is **Spotify**. It offers a **vast collection** of music, podcasts, and audiobooks that **cater to** all types of music lovers. Unlike traditional radio, Spotify gives me full control over what I want to listen to and when I want to listen. **Another advantage is** the app’s **personalized recommendations**. It suggests new songs and albums based on my listening history, providing me with a **tailored experience** every time. **Personally, I enjoy** exploring new genres of music that fascinate me and help me relax after a long day. This app not only entertains me but also introduces me to new artists.

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### 題目二：網路學習的優勢

**Unlike** traditional classrooms, online learning offers students more flexibility and control over their study schedules. **These platforms offer viewers more control over** what and when they learn, allowing them to study at their own pace. **Another advantage is** the availability of courses from all over the world, which means students can access lessons from top universities without leaving their homes. Online platforms also provide **personalized recommendations** based on student interests, creating a **tailored experience** that enhances learning. **Personally, I enjoy** online learning because it allows me to access practical and useful knowledge while balancing my other responsibilities.

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### 題目三：印象深刻的影片

One movie that left a lasting impression on me is **Inception**. The film’s **detailed technical aspects**, including its stunning visual effects and mind-bending storyline, **fascinate** me. **Unlike** other action films, **Inception** challenges the audience to think deeply about reality and dreams, creating a unique cinematic experience. **Personally, I enjoy** movies that make me reflect on deeper meanings, and this film did just that. The movie **not only entertains but also educates**, encouraging viewers to explore philosophical concepts. **Another advantage is** the strong character development, which makes the story emotionally engaging as well as intellectually stimulating.


![Screenshot 2024-09-13 at 22.47.34](https://hackmd.io/_uploads/S1bcgRW6R.png)



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# 第二回

![Screenshot 2024-09-20 at 21.22.23](https://hackmd.io/_uploads/HJozwxsTA.png)


![Screenshot 2024-09-20 at 21.21.19](https://hackmd.io/_uploads/S1sRUeo6R.png)



### 第一句：
**原句：**
"Last Friday was Ella's sixteenth birthday, so she decided to celebrate with a party with all friends."

1. **錯誤**： "with all friends" 應改為 **"with all her friends"**，需要使用所有格代詞 "her" 來表示朋友是屬於艾拉的。
2. **錯誤**："Last Friday was Ella's sixteenth birthday" 這句稍顯笨拙，可以重新調整語序使其更流暢：
   - **改善**： "Last Friday was Ella's 16th birthday, so she decided to throw a party with all her friends."  
     翻譯為：「上週五是艾拉的16歲生日，所以她決定和她所有的朋友一起開派對慶祝。」

### 第二句：
**原句：**
"Everyone showed her much the care Ella by bringing her a good gift."

1. **錯誤**："Everyone showed her much the care" 語序錯亂且不自然，需要重新組織語句。
   - **改善**："Everyone showed Ella how much they cared by bringing her nice gifts."
     翻譯為：「每個人都帶了很棒的禮物給艾拉，以表達他們對她的關心。」
2. **錯誤**："a good gift" 不太自然，應該改成 **"nice gifts"** 或 **"great gifts"**，尤其這裡指的是多人送的禮物。

### 第三句：
**原句：**
"Ella was delighted with all gifts, especially the camera she got from her friend Tammy."

1. **錯誤**："with all gifts" 應該改成 **"with all the gifts"** 以確保句子更清晰。
2. **錯誤**："the camera she got from her friend Tammy" 語法正確，但可稍作改進：
   - **改善**："Ella was delighted with all the gifts, especially the camera from her friend Tammy."
     翻譯為：「艾拉對所有的禮物都很滿意，尤其是她從朋友塔米那裡得到的相機。」

### 第四句：
**原句：**
"That's exactly what she wanted."

1. **錯誤**： 這句是正確的，但可以與上一句連接，使表達更流暢。
   - **改善**： 可以這樣連接上一句："It was exactly what she wanted."
     翻譯為：「那正是她想要的東西。」

### 第五句：
**原句：**
"After the party Ella felt how lucky she was to have such kind of friends."

1. **錯誤**："such kind of friends" 應改為 **"such kind friends"** 或 **"such good friends"**。"such kind of" 是不正確的。
   - **改善**："After the party, Ella felt lucky to have such great friends."
     翻譯為：「派對結束後，艾拉覺得自己擁有這麼好的朋友是非常幸運的。」

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### 最終改善版本：
"Last Friday was Ella's 16th birthday, so she decided to throw a party with all her friends. Everyone showed Ella how much they cared by bringing her nice gifts. Ella was delighted with all the gifts, especially the camera from her friend Tammy. It was exactly what she wanted. After the party, Ella felt lucky to have such great friends."

翻譯為：
「上週五是艾拉的16歲生日，所以她決定和她所有的朋友一起開派對慶祝。每個人都帶了很棒的禮物給艾拉，以表達他們對她的關心。艾拉對所有的禮物都很滿意，尤其是她從朋友塔米那裡得到的相機。那正是她想要的。派對結束後，艾拉覺得自己擁有這麼好的朋友是非常幸運的。」




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![Screenshot 2024-09-20 at 21.22.38](https://hackmd.io/_uploads/BkFXPxspA.png)


![Screenshot 2024-09-20 at 21.21.44](https://hackmd.io/_uploads/HJVevlia0.png)



### 第一段：
**原句：**
"Last weekend, I attended a lively fair organized by my school."

- **錯誤：**句子基本沒錯，但可以稍微提升語氣，使開頭更具吸引力：
  - **改善：**"Last weekend, I attended an exciting and lively fair organized by my school."  
    翻譯為：「上週末，我參加了學校舉辦的熱鬧而充滿活力的園遊會。」

### 第二句：
**原句：**
"The venue was decorated with vibrant color, creating a festive atmosphere."

- **錯誤：** "color" 應為複數形式 **"colors"**，因為這裡指的是多種顏色。
- **錯誤：** "creating" 可以用更具體的動詞以增強效果：
  - **改善：**"The venue was decorated with vibrant colors, creating a joyful and festive atmosphere."
    翻譯為：「會場以鮮豔的色彩裝飾，營造出歡樂的節日氣氛。」

### 第三句：
**原句：**
"The school playground was filled with various stall, and game areas."

- **錯誤：** "stall" 應為複數形式 **"stalls"**。
- **改善：**"The school playground was filled with various stalls and game areas."
  翻譯為：「學校的操場擺滿了各式各樣的攤位和遊戲區。」

### 第四句：
**原句：**
"One of the popular one was the inflatable slide, which was a huge hit with the kids."

- **錯誤：** "One of the popular one" 應為 **"One of the most popular ones"**，因為這裡指的是許多受歡迎的遊戲之一。
- **改善：**"One of the most popular ones was the inflatable slide, which was a huge hit with the kids."
  翻譯為：「其中最受歡迎的之一是充氣滑梯，深受孩子們的喜愛。」

### 第五句：
**原句：**
"In addition to the slide, there were many handmade crafts, color balloons and some snakes."

- **錯誤：** "color balloons" 應改為 **"colorful balloons"**，以描述氣球的顏色。
- **錯誤：** "some snakes" 這裡 "snakes" 似乎有些不合語境，可能指的是別的物品。
- **改善：**"In addition to the slide, there were many handmade crafts, colorful balloons, and some other fun activities."
  翻譯為：「除了滑梯，還有許多手工藝品、五顏六色的氣球以及其他有趣的活動。」

### 第六句：
**原句：**
"My stall was selling handmade snakes."

- **錯誤：** "snakes" 應更具體描述這是什麼類型的物品。如果是玩具蛇或者其他東西，需要明確。
- **改善：**"My stall was selling handmade toy snakes."
  翻譯為：「我的攤位在賣手工玩具蛇。」

### 第七句：
**原句：**
"Many students visited my stall, and seeing their happy faces as they enjoyed the treats was very fulfilling."

- **錯誤：** "the treats" 可以更具體化，但句子本身不錯。
- **改善：**"Many students visited my stall, and seeing their happy faces as they enjoyed the handmade items was very fulfilling."
  翻譯為：「許多學生來光顧我的攤位，看到他們在享受手工製品時臉上露出的笑容，讓我感到非常滿足。」

### 第八句：
**原句：**
"I feel satisfied of this time experience."

- **錯誤：** "satisfied of" 應改為 **"satisfied with"**，因為是對經歷感到滿意。
- **改善：**"I felt satisfied with this experience."
  翻譯為：「我對這次經歷感到非常滿意。」

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### 最終改善版本：
"Last weekend, I attended an exciting and lively fair organized by my school. The venue was decorated with vibrant colors, creating a joyful and festive atmosphere. The school playground was filled with various stalls and game areas. One of the most popular ones was the inflatable slide, which was a huge hit with the kids. In addition to the slide, there were many handmade crafts, colorful balloons, and some other fun activities. My stall was selling handmade toy snakes. Many students visited my stall, and seeing their happy faces as they enjoyed the handmade items was very fulfilling. I felt satisfied with this experience."



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### 參考範例：


Last weekend, I attended an exciting and lively fair organized by my school. The venue was decorated with vibrant colors, creating a joyful and festive atmosphere. The school playground was filled with various stalls and game areas. One of the most popular attractions was the inflatable slide, which was a huge hit with the kids. In addition to the slide, there were many handmade crafts, colorful balloons, and a variety of fun activities.

At school fairs, you can also see stalls selling delightful snacks like cotton candy, popcorn, or ice cream, and others offering souvenirs and toys. There are usually game booths where both kids and adults can play and win small prizes, contributing to a spirited environment. Sometimes, there are performances such as singing, dancing, or magic shows, enhancing the festive mood.

At one such fair, my cousin had a stall where he sold handmade candles. These candles, beautifully decorated and available in different scents like lavender and vanilla, were particularly popular. The joy on the faces of customers as they picked out their favorite scents was incredibly fulfilling to see. By the end of the day, he had sold out completely, making the experience both successful and memorable.

I felt very satisfied with this experience, seeing the community come together to enjoy and celebrate made the whole event truly special.

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上週末，我參加了學校舉辦的熱鬧且充滿活力的園遊會。會場裝飾著鮮豔的色彩，營造出歡樂且節日的氣氛。學校的操場上擺滿了各式各樣的攤位和遊戲區。其中最受歡迎的設施之一是充氣滑梯，深受孩子們的喜愛。除了滑梯外，還有許多手工藝品、五顏六色的氣球以及其他有趣的活動。

在園遊會上，你還可以看到一些攤位出售美味的小吃，如棉花糖、爆米花或冰淇淋，還有一些攤位賣紀念品和玩具。通常也會有遊戲攤位，無論是小孩還是大人都可以玩，並有機會贏取小獎品，這讓氣氛更加熱鬧。有時，還會有唱歌、跳舞或魔術表演，進一步提升節日的氛圍。

在某次園遊會上，我的堂兄有一個攤位，售賣手工蠟燭。這些蠟燭裝飾精美，並且有不同的香味，如薰衣草和香草，特別受歡迎。看到顧客挑選自己喜愛的香味，臉上露出滿意的笑容，讓人感到非常滿足。到了一天結束時，他的蠟燭全部售罄，這讓整個體驗既成功又難忘。

我對這次經歷感到非常滿意，看到社區的人們聚在一起享受和慶祝，讓整個活動變得格外特別。

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# 第三回

Here are the responses for each question:

1. **When was the last time you visited the night market? What did you do?**
   - The last time I visited the night market was about two weeks ago. I walked around, tried some local snacks, and bought a few drinks. It was a fun and relaxing experience, especially with all the different foods available.

2. **What will you do if you are angry?**
   - I will not talk to anyone. Sometimes, I take a walk around the park to calm myself down. It helps me clear my mind and feel better.

3. **What will you choose to eat with hot pot - rice or noodles?**
   - I prefer to eat hotpot with rice because rice is my favorite. Also, I can easily feel full after having some rice, and it complements the hot pot very well.

4. **You see Ken cheating. What will you do?**
   - Being honest is important. It is okay if you fail the exam or test, but it might not be okay if a person tries to cheat. If I saw Ken cheating, I would raise my hand and inform the teacher.

5. **Do you usually eat snacks in the evening? Why or why not?**
   - No, I don’t usually eat snacks in the evening because I try to maintain a healthy diet. Eating too late at night might affect my sleep, and it’s easy to gain weight if you snack too often.

6. **Have you ever prepared some meals for your parents?**
   - Yes, I have prepared meals for my parents several times. I like to cook simple dishes to express my gratitude to them for always taking care of me.

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![Screenshot 2024-09-27 at 19.30.24](https://hackmd.io/_uploads/S1yDPzER0.png)



1. 這個地方很可能是一個夜市或台灣傳統的小吃攤區。從圖片中的招牌可以看出，這裡賣的食物包括臭豆腐和麵食，這些都是台灣非常受歡迎的街頭小吃。

1. This place is most likely a night market or a traditional food stall area in Taiwan. The visible signs indicate the type of food being sold, including stinky tofu and noodles, which are popular street foods in Taiwan. 

2. 圖片中的人似乎在吃東西、聊天和點餐。有些人坐在桌邊享受他們的餐點，另一些人則在攤位前排隊等著點餐。這種熱鬧和擁擠的氣氛很符合夜市的典型特徵。

2. The people in the picture appear to be eating, chatting, and ordering food. Some are sitting at the tables enjoying their meals, while others are lining up in front of the stalls, waiting to place their orders. The atmosphere looks lively and crowded, typical of a night market setting.

3. 我會想嘗試這種食物，特別是臭豆腐，因為這是當地著名的美食，很多遊客和當地人都推薦。雖然它的氣味很濃，但我聽說味道很獨特，一旦克服了氣味，味道就非常美味。這將是一個嘗試真正台灣街頭小吃的有趣體驗。


3. Yes, I would like to try this type of food, especially stinky tofu, because it is a famous local delicacy that many tourists and locals recommend. Even though it has a strong smell, I’ve heard that the taste is unique and delicious once you get past the odor. It would be an interesting experience to try authentic Taiwanese street food.

4. 如果還有時間的話，我會描述這個場景的整體氛圍，人們坐在小凳子上，旁邊是各個小吃攤。燈光看起來溫暖，環境很親切、隨意。攤位上方的招牌展示著不同的價格和食物選項，這是當地市場很常見的景象。

4. If there’s more time, I would describe the overall scene, where people are sitting on small stools by the food stalls. The lighting looks warm, and the environment seems very inviting and casual. The signs above the stalls display different prices and food options, which is typical in local markets.




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![Screenshot 2024-09-30 at 19.58.23](https://hackmd.io/_uploads/B1FuMf_RC.png)


以下是根據學生作文的錯誤與修改建議：

### **學生作文內容：**
*"On Sunday, my family and I had a picnic in the park. The sun was shining, so we sat under a tree. Enjoying the delicious salad and some sandwiches and snacks that my mom had prepared. After that, I watched the other people in the park. A group of kids were playing basketball and they looked so happy. Overall, it was a wonderful day."*

---

### **錯誤與修改建議：**

1. **第一句：**
   - 原文：*"On Sunday, my family and I had a picnic in the park."*
   - **問題：** 無明顯錯誤。
   - **建議：** 這句簡潔明瞭，保持不變。

2. **第二句：**
   - 原文：*"The sun was shining, so we sat under a tree."*
   - **問題：** 句子結構正確，但 "so" 表達結果，可用更高級的連接詞來替代。
   - **修改：** "The sun was shining brightly, therefore we decided to sit under a tree."
   - **建議：** 使用 "therefore" 來取代 "so" 使語句更加正式。

3. **第三句：**
   - 原文：*"Enjoying the delicious salad and some sandwiches and snacks that my mom had prepared."*
   - **問題：** 這是個片語，缺少主詞和動詞，與前句不連貫。
   - **修改：** "We enjoyed the delicious salad, along with some sandwiches and snacks that my mom had prepared."
   - **建議：** 完整句子應有主語和動詞，並用 "along with" 來避免重複 "and"。

4. **第四句：**
   - 原文：*"After that, I watched the other people in the park."*
   - **問題：** 句子過於簡單，表達可以更具體。
   - **修改：** "After that, I spent some time observing the other people in the park."
   - **建議：** 用 "spent some time observing" 替代 "watched"，使句子更具描寫性。

5. **第五句：**
   - 原文：*"A group of kids were playing basketball and they looked so happy."*
   - **問題：** "A group of kids" 是集合名詞，動詞應該使用單數形式。
   - **修改：** "A group of kids was playing basketball, and they looked so happy."
   - **建議：** "group" 是集合名詞，應與單數動詞搭配。

6. **最後一句：**
   - 原文：*"Overall, it was a wonderful day."*
   - **問題：** 無明顯錯誤，但可以進一步強調感受。
   - **修改：** "All in all, it was truly a wonderful and memorable day."
   - **建議：** 使用 "All in all" 替代 "Overall"，並加入 "memorable" 來增強感情表達。

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### **總評與建議：**

- **語法：** 文章中的語法問題不多，但部分句子不完整，需要補充主語與動詞來保持連貫性。
- **詞彙使用：** 詞彙使用較為簡單，可以引入更多具體且豐富的表達來增強描述的生動性。
- **句式多樣性：** 建議學生嘗試使用更多不同的連接詞（如 "therefore"、"all in all"），並且避免句子過度簡短。

### **總體建議：**
這篇文章的內容結構清晰，敘述了一個簡單的戶外活動經歷。通過補充完整句子、使用更高級的詞彙和多樣的句式，這篇文章可以更具表現力和流暢度。



![Screenshot 2024-09-30 at 21.23.09](https://hackmd.io/_uploads/SJtrUQuAA.png)



### **題目提示：**
1. 解釋為什麼社群媒體如此受歡迎。
2. 你對於使用社群媒體的人會給什麼忠告？

---

### **學生文章的錯誤與修改建議：**

1. **第一句：**
   - 原文：*"Social media has become increasingly popular in recent years, primarily because it provides a convenient platform for people to connect with friends and family anytime and anywhere."*
   - **問題：** “Primarily” 可以放在 "in recent years" 後面以增強句子流暢度。"Social media allow users to share moments" 中的 "allow" 應與複數的 "social media" 一致。
   - **修改：** "Social media has become increasingly popular in recent years, primarily because it provides a convenient platform for people to connect with friends and family anytime and anywhere. Social media allows users to share moments from their lives, whether through photos, videos, or text posts."
   - **建議：** 確保動詞和主詞的單複數一致，例如 "media" 是複數，所以動詞應用 "allow"。

2. **第三句：**
   - 原文：*"This instant sharing makes individuals feel closer to one another."*
   - **修改：** "This instant sharing allows individuals to feel closer to one another."
   - **建議：** 使用 "allows" 會讓句子更順暢。

3. **第五到第六句：**
   - 原文：*"It serves as an essential source of information, enabling users to quickly access the latest news, entertainment, and various events."*
   - **問題：** 雖然語法正確，但 “and various events” 可以簡化。
   - **修改：** "It serves as an essential source of information, enabling users to quickly access the latest news, entertainment, and events."
   - **建議：** 通過簡化冗餘語句來提高閱讀的流暢度。

4. **第七到第八句：**
   - 原文：*"Additionally, it fosters global communication, allowing users to interact with people from different parts of the world and share diverse cultures and perspectives."*
   - **問題：** “different parts of the world” 可以更簡潔地表達。
   - **修改：** "Additionally, it fosters global communication, allowing users to interact with people worldwide and share diverse cultures and perspectives."
   - **建議：** 簡潔的表達能提升句子的可讀性。

5. **第九到第十句：**
   - 原文：*"It offers opportunities for business promotion, as many companies leverage these platforms to reach potential customers and increase brand awareness."*
   - **修改：** 這段寫得很好，不過可以進一步解釋 “business promotion”。
   - **建議：** 考慮進一步闡述 "business promotion" 是怎樣的推廣方式，以增強理解。

6. **最後一句：**
   - 原文：*"Considering all these factors, social media has become an indispensable part of modern life."*
   - **修改：** 這是很有效的結尾，不需要進一步修改。


### **總評與建議：**

- **語法：** 學生對語法的掌握不錯，但需要注意主語與動詞的一致性（例如 “allow” 應與複數名詞 "social media" 保持一致）。
- **詞彙與句式多樣性：** 詞彙使用得當，但某些地方可以減少重複，使用更多同義詞或變換句型來提高可讀性。
- **結構與內容：** 文章結構合理，能夠回答題目要求，說明了社群媒體的受歡迎原因，也簡單觸及了其在現代生活中的重要性。

### **給學生的忠告：**

- **動詞一致性：** 動詞要與主語的單複數保持一致，尤其是像 “media” 這樣的集合名詞。
- **簡潔性：** 在可能的情況下簡化語句，避免冗長的表達，如 "various events" 可以簡化為 "events"。
- **連貫與過渡：** 使用 "Additionally" 這類連接詞能夠保持段落之間的流暢性，這部分做得很好，繼續保持。

整體而言，這篇作文展示了不錯的寫作潛力，經過小幅修改後，應該可以很好地達到題目要求。



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## 第三回最終修正版：


Social media has become increasingly popular in recent years, primarily because it provides a convenient platform for people to connect with friends and family anytime and anywhere. Social media allows users to share moments from their lives, whether through photos, videos, or text posts. It serves as an essential source of real information, enabling users to quickly access the latest news, entertainment, and various events. Additionally, it fosters global communication, allowing users to interact with people from around the world and share diverse cultures and perspectives. It offers opportunities for business promotion, as many companies leverage these platforms to reach potential customers. Considering all these factors, social media has become an indispensable part of modern life.

However, users should be mindful of the amount of time spent on social media and ensure they verify the information they come across to avoid misinformation. While social media can be a great tool for communication and entertainment, it's important not to spend too much time on it. Users should balance their online activities with real-life interactions to maintain a healthy lifestyle. Not everything we see online is accurate, so it’s crucial to always filter information and verify sources. Additionally, social media is filled with opinions and misinformation, so users need to be cautious and think critically before believing or sharing content. In the end, social media is a tool to stay connected, but we must ensure it doesn’t control our time or impact our well-being negatively.**



### 你對於使用社群媒體的人會給什麼忠告？



1. **Avoid Overuse**:
   - *While social media can be a great tool for communication and entertainment, it's important not to spend too much time on it. Users should balance their online activities with real-life interactions to maintain a healthy lifestyle.*

   （雖然社群媒體是很好的溝通和娛樂工具，但重要的是不要花費過多時間。用戶應該平衡線上活動和現實生活的互動，以保持健康的生活方式。）

2. **Filter Information**:
   - *Not everything we see online is accurate. Users should always be critical and verify the sources of the information they encounter to avoid being misled.*

   （並非我們在網路上看到的所有內容都是正確的。用戶應該時刻保持批判性，並核實所遇到訊息的來源，以避免被誤導。）

3. **Be Aware of Misinformation**:
   - *Social media is filled with opinions and misinformation. Users need to be cautious and think critically before believing or sharing content.*

   （社群媒體充斥著各種意見和錯誤資訊。用戶在相信或分享內容之前，應該謹慎並批判性思考。）

4. **Mind Your Privacy**:
   - *While sharing personal moments is fun, it's essential to be mindful of what you post. Protect your privacy and avoid sharing sensitive information online.*

   （分享個人生活是有趣的，但注意你所發佈的內容很重要。保護你的隱私，避免在網上分享敏感資訊。）

5. **Stay Connected, Not Addicted**:
   - *It's easy to get addicted to social media, but remember that it’s just a tool. Use it to stay connected with friends and family, but don't let it control your time.*

   （很容易對社群媒體上癮，但請記住它只是一個工具。使用它來與朋友和家人保持聯繫，但不要讓它控制你的時間。）



# 第四回
![Screenshot 2024-10-04 at 21.34.09](https://hackmd.io/_uploads/Sk5k1uTRA.png)


![Screenshot 2024-10-04 at 21.33.12](https://hackmd.io/_uploads/B1rsAvpAC.png)

1. **句子 1**：
   - 原句：*Tomorrow, my friend and I are going to the aquarium.*  
   - 建議：*Tomorrow, my friend and I are going to the aquarium.* （正確，無需修改）

2. **句子 2**：
   - 原句：*We've never been there before, so we are excited to see all the different kinds of fish.*  
   - 建議：*We've never been there before, so we are excited to see all the different kinds of fish.* （正確，無需修改）

3. **句子 3**：
   - 原句：*We want to take photos in the underwater tunnel.*  
   - 建議：*We want to take photos in the underwater tunnel.* （正確，無需修改）

4. **句子 4**：
   - 原句：*We will be surrounded by many kinds of fish and get close as possible to turtles and sharks.*  
   - 問題：*“get close as possible”* 應改為 *“get as close as possible”*，語法上需加 “as”。  
   - 建議：*We will be surrounded by many kinds of fish and get as close as possible to turtles and sharks.*

5. **句子 5**：
   - 原句：*We are also excited to learn some amazing facts about the creatures that live in our oceans.*  
   - 建議：*We are also excited to learn some amazing facts about the creatures that live in our oceans.* （正確，無需修改）

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### 最終修改版本：

> Tomorrow, my friend and I are going to the aquarium. We've never been there before, so we are excited to see all the different kinds of fish. We want to take photos in the underwater tunnel. We will be surrounded by many kinds of fish and get as close as possible to turtles and sharks. We are also excited to learn some amazing facts about the creatures that live in our oceans.

總體來說，文章表達清晰，結構良好，只在第四句有一個小的語法問題。

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![Screenshot 2024-10-04 at 21.33.45](https://hackmd.io/_uploads/SJwTAv600.png)
![Screenshot 2024-10-04 at 21.33.28](https://hackmd.io/_uploads/H1V2CDp0A.png)



### 內容批改與建議：

1. **句子 1**：
   - 原句：*Sometimes family dynamics can be challenging, such as when your friend’s brother frequently takes his belongings without permission, leaving your friend upset.*
   - 建議：這句表達很清楚，可以保持不變。唯一需要注意的是 "dynamics" 是複數形式，這樣用法正確。

2. **句子 2**：
   - 原句：*I would suggest that your friend calmly and personally talk to his brother, expressing how this behavior makes him feel and emphasizing the importance of respecting each other's personal belongings.*
   - 建議：此句結構良好，表達明確。只是 "personally" 和 "calmly" 可以稍微調整順序，可能會更自然。
   - 修改後：*I would suggest that your friend personally and calmly talk to his brother, expressing how this behavior makes him feel and emphasizing the importance of respecting each other's personal belongings.*

3. **句子 3**：
   - 原句：*He could say something like, "I understand you may not see this as a big deal, but every time you take my things without asking, I feel disrespected. I hope we can respect each other, and it will improve our relationship."*
   - 建議：這句非常好，直接引用對話，語氣和表達都恰當。

4. **句子 4**：
   - 原句：*This kind of communication can help his brother understand the impact on their relationship and encourage better interactions.*
   - 建議：這句話的意思清楚，沒有需要修改的部分。

5. **句子 5**：
   - 原句：*As for myself, or people around me, similar situations have occurred.*
   - 問題：這句話中 "As for myself" 和 "or people around me" 的搭配不太自然。可以考慮拆分成兩句，或者改用 "In my experience" 來表達。
   - 修改後：*In my experience, or among people around me, similar situations have occurred.*

6. **句子 6**：
   - 原句：*I recall a friend who used to borrow my books or notebooks without asking. Once, I couldn't find my notebook, and later discovered he had taken it again.*
   - 建議：這段描述很好，簡單而有效地說明了情境。無需進一步修改。

7. **句子 7**：
   - 原句：*I felt frustrated, but after talking to him about the importance of asking first, our relationship improved, and communication became smoother.*
   - 建議：句子的結尾處理很好，情感表達也很到位，無需修改。

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### 回應兩個問題：
這篇文章很好地回答了第一個問題，即「你會建議你的朋友如何向他哥哥說不應如此？」文章給出了具體的建議，並展示了如何通過溝通來解決問題。

但是，對於第二個問題「你或你周遭的人有類似經驗嗎？請描述」，雖然文章提到了作者自己或周圍人的經歷，但對該經驗的描述相對簡短，可以再擴充一些細節，比如說明當時情境或心情，這樣會使文章的內容更加完整。

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### 總結：
1. 整體文章內容和組織結構不錯，回答了兩個問題，但第二個問題的回答可以更詳細。
2. 文章表達通順，建議在某些地方稍微調整語序，讓句子更自然。



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# 第四回最終修正版

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Sometimes family dynamics can be challenging, such as when your friend’s brother frequently takes his belongings without permission, leaving your friend upset. I would suggest that your friend personally and calmly talk to his brother, expressing how this behavior makes him feel and emphasizing the importance of respecting each other's personal belongings. He could say something like, "I understand you may not see this as a big deal, but every time you take my things without asking, I feel disrespected. I hope we can respect each other, and it will improve our relationship." This kind of communication can help his brother understand the impact on their relationship and encourage better interactions.

In my experience, or among people around me, similar situations have occurred. I recall a friend who used to borrow my books or notebooks without asking. Once, I couldn't find my notebook, and later discovered he had taken it again. I felt frustrated, but after talking to him about the importance of asking first, our relationship improved, and communication became smoother. Through this experience, I learned that clear communication is key to resolving misunderstandings. By discussing the importance of respect and boundaries, it helped to prevent future issues and allowed us to maintain a healthy friendship.

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