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title: Comment - Apr 19

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# Comment - Apr 19

## P5. 
Visualized simulated airflow -> Visualized simulated airflow

## P6. 
> "Scan the models of surrounding vehicles all the time."

Detect the number of surrounding vehicles.
I don’t think mentioning “all the time” is required but to specific the action (i.e. “to detect”) is more important.

> "Connect to the Azure AI platform to integrate the exhaust emissions of various vehicle, the stop time and the information from AIoT sensor." 

Integrate information from Azure DB, including exhaust emission of vehicles and the waiting duration.

> "Show warning signals and suggestions if necessary."

Signal users on critical condition such as ....

> “create a 3D image of the environment and the position of the windows.”

construct a 3D scene including the position of 
windows

> "Automatically identify the types of oil when cooking food, use the smoke shapes and oil boiling patterns to calculate the oil temperature with AI, and integrate the information from the AIoT sensor." 
> 
-> Identify the types of the oil based on the smoke and oil boiling patterns with Azure Machine Learning and integration with additional information from AIoT sensor. 

> "Users will be suggested to open windows and expel harmful substances with fans." 

Not really related to AI?
This may weaken the solution because this alternative is easier to achieve meanwhile useful. (provide alternative solution weakens the argument)

> Automatically detect the. number of people in the environment, locations, staying time, and objects being touched

Identify the number of people present in the surroundings, their location, duration of stay, and the objects they are interacting with.

> Combined with the information from the AIoT sensor.
If detect someone coughing or sneezing, do Real-time calculation and simulation to generate the distribution of virus residues on the surface of various objects and spreading air map.

Simulate the spread of virus on detecting someone coughing or sneezing; the simulation is generated on Azure VM in real time in accordance with data collected from AIoT sensors.

> The glasses will display simulated ...

-> The glasses display simulated (use simple present)

> they will be marked in green when it is below the safe value. When the safety value is exceeded, it will be marked in red and a warning notice will be issued. 

Specify “what” will be marked green when “what” is below the safe value?

> The suggested corresponding will show on the screen of the glasses. 

I cannot understand the meaning.

> The AIoT sensor provides the wind direction, wind speed, temperature, humidity etc..

The AIoT sensor collects the information of the wind direction, wind speed, temperature, humidity etc.

## P7
> Azure Cognitive Service for Vision (7)

* Spatial analysis
https://azure.microsoft.com/en-us/products/cognitive-services/vision-services/#features

* Custom Object Detection (for detecting the vehicles)
https://azure.microsoft.com/en-us/products/cognitive-services/custom-vision-service/#stories

> * Integrating the environmental Information from IoT, databases, rear time images, buildings information to complete the data modeling
> * Building AI models with APIs of Azure platform and proprietary algorithms to identify, analyze and calculate various situations in time
> * Presenting the real-time, visible simulated distributions, and contents of carcinogens / viruses.

Show these steps happen in series.


## P9.
* Accountability text box is same as inclusiveness.

> Keep the GPS, building information, personal information in the robust cloud service provider

Utilize robust cloud service to keep the GPS, building information and personal information.

> The system allow use to operate on anonymous basis and didn’t collect and store personal information.

The system do not collect personal information and operate on de-identified data

> Low human judgement, very low mitigating bias

I couldn't understand what is “low mitigating bias”?

Maybe you mean human bias mitigation?

## P10
* Identity: follow the policy of
https://learn.microsoft.com/en-us/azure/governance/policy/overview

> Well defined policies for cybersecurity that include roles and responsibilities 

Adopt role based policy for cybersecurity.

* Protect: Microsoft Defender for Cloud, Azure Storage Service Encryption, Azure SQL Firewall
* Detect: Azure Monitor Log
* Recover:Azure Backup, Azure Site Recovery
* Response: Microsoft Defender for Cloud

> * Develop and implement the appropriate activities to identify the cybersecurity events 

This one is like identifying.
>* Maintain and monitor logs in the system and applications

This one is like detecting.
>* Full considered the impacts of security events

This is like identifying.
