# What I’ve Learned From Helping Writers Grow


I have been running small writing circles for a long time, and I have to admit that I never planned on doing it. It started with a friend who kept asking me to look over her stories because she said I explained things in a way that made her feel calm instead of nervous. I did not think much of it at the time. I figured I was just talking the way I always talk. But one night she walked into my kitchen with a stack of printed pages, set them on the table, and said she wanted me to lead a group the next month. She had other friends who wrote too, and they needed someone who could guide them without making them feel small. I laughed because I was not a teacher or anything like that. I was just someone who liked figuring out why a line felt strong and why another felt flat. But she did not let it go, and I finally said yes.

The first meeting took place in the back room of a little art store that smelled like old books and acrylic paint. There were only four people sitting around the table, all of them looking at me as if I knew something important. I remember being nervous about that part. I am not a big expert in anything. I just pay attention to how things sound and feel. Still, I sat down, took a breath, and started talking about how giving writing critique works best when everyone feels safe first. I said it is like trying to tune a guitar. You cannot do it if your hand is shaking and you feel like you are being judged. You need a steady place to hold the instrument and a calm space to listen. That was my first variation of the idea that feedback is really just a way of helping someone steady their thoughts.

Everyone nodded, and that gave me enough confidence to keep going. I asked each person to read a few lines of what they brought. Some voices were quiet, some rushed, and some cracked a little from nerves, but I could tell they all really cared about their work. That is the part I still love the most. When a writer cares deeply about something, even if it is messy or confusing at first, there is always something bright in there waiting to be noticed. You just have to look for it with the right kind of attention.

What surprised me most back then was how small suggestions could change a whole scene. One person wrote about a character standing in the rain waiting for a bus that never came. The idea was strong, but the lines kept pulling away from the emotion instead of into it. I asked her what the character felt under all that waiting. Was he angry, tired, hopeful, or something else. The moment she answered the question out loud, her whole face lit up. She realized she had been writing around the feeling instead of through it. That moment stuck with me. It made me understand how feedback becomes a kind of mirror. Writers often know what they want to say. They just cannot always see it clearly from their own angle.

Another person wrote something funny that he did not realize was funny at all. When I pointed out the humor and why it worked, he stared at me like I had opened a door he did not see before. Sometimes we miss our own strengths because we think we are supposed to sound a certain way. Writers talk themselves out of their natural style more often than anyone admits. They look for rules and patterns and try to force themselves into shapes that do not fit. When I say that out loud in groups, I can feel everyone relax a little. You can almost hear the room loosen. It is like telling someone that the way they laugh is actually their best feature. It gives them permission to trust their voice again.

I guess I have always liked moments like that because they remind me how human writing is. It is not a puzzle to solve perfectly. It is a messy, emotional, personal thing that comes out crooked half the time. That is part of the charm. When I give a writing critique, I do not want to sound like someone holding a red pen over a test. I want to sound like a teammate. Someone who says you are onto something good and here is how to make it even stronger. I think people learn better when they feel supported. Maybe that is obvious, but I have seen so many writers shut down after one harsh comment. I never want to be the reason someone stops sharing their work.

There was one workshop night where the group felt a little chaotic. People arrived late, papers were shuffling everywhere, and someone spilled tea over their pages. For a second I thought the night would be a waste. But then something odd happened. The mess actually made everyone loosen up. Suddenly they were laughing, joking, and passing napkins down the table. That goofy start made the whole session smoother. People read with less tension. They asked more questions. They even leaned in closer when someone shared something personal. I learned that a room does not need to be perfect for good feedback to happen. It just needs to feel alive and welcoming.

Sometimes I share a memory from when I first started writing myself. I wrote a short story that I thought was brilliant. I mean, I was proud of it in a way that made no sense. Then I asked someone older and wiser to read it. He pointed out so many places that were confusing or overdone that I almost felt sick. I remember thinking he had no idea what he was talking about. But later that night, after the sting faded, I read the story again. I saw exactly what he meant. That was the first time I understood the real gift behind helpful critique. It does not always feel comfortable at first, but it opens a door. And once that door opens, you cannot unsee the truth that your piece could be better with a few careful changes.

When I share that memory with new writers, it helps them see that everyone starts somewhere. No one is immune to being too close to their own work. No one is perfect on the first try. I still make mistakes. I still overwrite. I still miss obvious things. The difference now is that I know how to look for them, and I know how to ask others for insight in a way that feels supportive instead of scary. That is what I want people to feel when they join my circles. Not fear. Not pressure. Just space to grow.

One of the biggest surprises over the years is how much people open up when they start talking about why they write. Almost every person who has ever walked into one of my groups has a story behind the story. Some talk about grandparents who read to them when they were kids. Others talk about a teacher who once told them they had a good ear for language. A few say they write because it is the one place where their thoughts make sense. Those conversations always shift the room. People sit up straighter. They listen harder. It becomes clear that the work on the page is connected to something deeper inside them.

I remember a man named Dennis who joined the group during a rough time in his life. He worked long shifts at a local factory and said he barely had space to think, let alone write. But he still showed up with a notebook full of half-finished scenes. The pages were wrinkled and sometimes smudged with grease from his job, but the words had so much heart that everyone leaned in when he read. The first time I gave him a writing critique, I focused on the parts where his natural voice came through strongest. I told him he had a way of describing small moments that made them feel heavy in a good way. He blinked a few times, almost confused by the compliment, and then said he never thought of himself as someone with style. That was a good reminder for me. People cannot see their own voice until someone points it out gently.

There was also a teenager who joined us for one summer. Her name was Lila, and she carried a little stack of printed poems clipped together with a purple binder clip. She barely spoke above a whisper at first. I could tell she was scared of being judged, so I did something I often do when someone seems nervous. I asked her to pick just one line she liked in her own piece. She hesitated, sighed, and then pointed to a sentence about the way sunlight hit her bedroom wall in the morning. The moment she started describing why she liked that line, her whole tone changed. Her hands loosened. Her voice steadied. I told her that the same warmth she just showed me needed to live inside her writing too. She nodded like she finally understood what she had been trying to do. It was one of those small breakthroughs that I think about even now.

Sometimes the sessions turn into little experiments. I will ask people to rewrite a sentence but only change the rhythm, not the meaning. Or I will ask them to read their paragraph as if they are telling it to a friend who is half asleep. Each time, they discover something new. Maybe the sentence sounds better shorter. Maybe the emotion feels stronger when spoken softly. Every time someone laughs at the awkwardness of trying something new, the room fills with this feeling of shared discovery. It is not about being perfect. It is about exploring.

One thing I have learned is that people do not always know what part of their writing is holding them back. They might say they struggle with plot, but really it is the pacing. They might think their dialogue is flat, but really it is the lack of sensory detail. When I notice these patterns, I try to guide them with questions instead of straight answers. If I tell someone the exact fix, it might not stick. But if they answer a question that leads them to the fix, they usually remember it forever. Sometimes the variation I use is asking them what emotion they want the reader to feel first. Most people never think about it that way, but it always opens a new door.

One night we had a session that ran longer than planned. Nobody wanted to leave because everyone was deep into the flow of talking, reading, laughing, and figuring things out. It was the kind of night where the air feels warm even if the room is cold. People started sharing the reasons they sometimes avoid writing. Someone said they feel silly. Someone else said they worry their ideas are too simple. Another person admitted they rewrite the same paragraph for days because they are scared to go forward. I said something I often say in those moments, which is that fear has a sneaky way of pretending to be self control. It makes us think we are holding off because the timing is not right, but really we are just scared of what will happen if we keep going. I know that feeling myself. There are days I dodge my own projects because the blank page can feel like a wall.

But that night something special happened. We talked openly about all those fears until they started losing their grip. People began offering small suggestions for each other. Someone said to write before breakfast so you do not have time to overthink. Someone else said to write in a place where nobody knows you so you do not feel watched. A third person said to carry a tiny notebook and write two sentences every time you wait in line. Hearing those ideas bounce around reminded me how supportive people can be when given a safe space.

It also reminded me why kindness is so important in any feedback setting. You can always tell when someone has been hit with harsh words in the past. They flinch when you turn to their page. They brace themselves like they are preparing for bad news. Those are the people I pay attention to the most. I make sure the room softens first. I let others speak before I do. And when it is finally my turn, I point out the bright spots with real intention. Not fake praise. Real things that work. Real moments where the writing breathes. People need that before they can hear anything else.

One writer named Paula wrote these strange, dreamy descriptions that sometimes drifted into confusion. But when her images worked, they were beautiful in a way that made the whole room quiet. When I gave her feedback, I told her she had something rare but that it needed shaping. I said her writing was like a garden that grew wild and needed a little trimming so the flowers could be seen clearly. That made her smile because she said her backyard looked exactly like that. From then on, every time she brought something new, she would talk about how she tried to trim it in the right places. It became a shared language between us.

Moments like that keep me excited about this work. Every person brings something different to the table. Some bring humor. Some bring honesty. Some bring careful detail. Some bring raw emotion. My job is not to change their voice. My job is to help them understand it and use it in a way that fits what they want to say. When a person feels seen, they start writing differently. Their confidence shifts. Their choices become deliberate instead of accidental. And that is when the magic happens.

At the end of almost every session, someone will say they learned something about themselves, not just about the page. That always surprises me even though it should not. Writing is tangled up with who we are. When we talk about how to improve our words, we are often really talking about how to understand our thoughts. I think that is why people keep coming back. It is not just about sentences and paragraphs. It is about connection.

There was a stretch of time when I started doing these sessions twice a week because more people kept asking to join. I never advertised anything. It all grew from word of mouth. One person would bring a friend. That friend would bring someone they knew from work. Before I realized what was happening, the little back room at the art store felt too small. Chairs scraped against the floor as everyone tried to squeeze in. Someone always had to sit on the stool near the paint displays. The owner did not mind because she liked hearing all the conversations float out toward the front of the shop. She said it made the place feel warm.

During that period, I learned something important about myself. I liked talking about writing more than I expected. Not in a bossy way. More like I enjoyed following the path of someone’s idea and seeing where it wanted to go. Every story in the room had a different energy to it. Some were loud and bold. Some were soft and wandering. And some were tangled up in a way that made the writer feel frustrated. My role was just to pay attention and help them notice the places where the work tugged or loosened or brightened. When I kept that simple thought in mind, everything felt easier.

One night, a woman named Charmaine brought in a short scene she wrote during her lunch break at the hospital where she worked. She said she wrote in tiny bursts between rounds, scribbling a few sentences whenever she could. Her scene was about a character walking home after a long shift and noticing a stray cat sitting on a mailbox. It was simple, but there was a quiet ache underneath it that everyone felt. When I gave her a writing critique, I focused on that ache. I told her that the feeling she captured might be the heart of something bigger. Her eyes softened a little when she heard that. She admitted that she wrote the scene on a day when she felt overwhelmed. She said she did not think anyone would notice that feeling because it was small. But that is the trick. The small stuff often hits the hardest.

Around the same time, I started experimenting with reading sessions where people listened to their work instead of looking at it. I noticed that when writers read their pages out loud, they could hear where a sentence dragged or snapped too quickly. They could hear where the emotion felt thin or rushed. One night I asked everyone to trade pages and read someone else’s piece instead. The whole group laughed nervously, but after a few minutes the room settled into this steady rhythm of voices crossing over each other. People heard their writing from a new angle, and the reactions were priceless. It is funny how words you wrote yourself can surprise you when they come from another person’s mouth.

I remember one guy named Mateo who always spoke fast, like his ideas were trying to outrun him. He wrote action scenes full of sharp turns and big choices, but sometimes he skipped over the emotional beats that would make the moment land. When someone else read his work, the missing pieces became obvious. He planted his face in his hands and groaned. But then he laughed and said he could finally hear what everyone had been trying to tell him. After that night, his writing shifted. He started slowing down at key moments, letting the feeling sit for a second before the next burst of action. Watching that change unfold was one of those moments that reminded me why these groups matter.

Another memorable night happened during a storm. Rain kept tapping the windows, steady but not too loud. Only five people made it because the weather was rough, but that smaller group ended up creating one of the most thoughtful sessions we ever had. The room felt cozy, almost like we were hidden from the rest of the world. People shared pieces that were more personal than usual. One person wrote about her first year living alone. Someone else wrote about losing touch with an old friend. Every piece carried a small weight to it.

During that session, I used a variation I rarely use. I asked everyone to write an answer to the question: What do you wish someone had told you when you started writing. It was supposed to be a quick warm up, maybe five minutes. But everyone kept writing. Pens scratched the paper for nearly twenty minutes. When people finally shared their answers, the room went quiet between each one. Most of them were about letting go of fear. Some were about trusting the messy first draft. One was about giving yourself permission to sound like yourself instead of some imaginary version of a writer. I still think about those answers because they came from a place of honesty that only appears when people feel safe.

I think the biggest turning point for me came when I realized that I enjoyed helping others more than finishing my own work. At first I felt guilty about that. Writers are supposed to be working on their own stories, right. But the truth is, guiding others made me feel energized in a different way. I liked watching someone’s face shift when they understood something new. I liked seeing the pages people brought the next week after they tried something different. It felt meaningful. Not in a grand way, but in a steady, consistent way that grows slowly over time.

Sometimes people ask me if I ever get tired of repeating similar advice. But the funny thing is, I never say the same thing twice. Even if two writers struggle with pacing, the paths that lead them there are different. One person might be rushing because they do not trust the scene. Another might be skipping details because they assume the reader can fill in the blanks. Every case is unique. So the conversations stay fresh.

There was a moment that still makes me laugh when I think about it. A man who had been in the group for almost a year rewrote the same opening paragraph eight times. He brought it to us every other week like clockwork. Finally one night I said he should take a break from that paragraph and write something else. He looked at me as if I had suggested he stop breathing. But then he tried it. He wrote a completely new scene, read it to us with a little embarrassment, and it ended up being the best thing he had ever written. He said he did not realize how stuck he was until he stepped away from the familiar. That proved to me how much people cling to what feels safe, even if it keeps them from growing.

Over time, I found myself adjusting how I talk to each person individually. Some people need direct feedback. Some need gentle nudges. Some need me to ask a string of questions until they see the answer themselves. It reminded me of how coaches work with athletes. Not every player responds to the same kind of guidance. You have to pay attention to how a person learns, not just what they write.

One of my favorite nights was when we talked about why small details matter. I asked everyone to bring one tiny memory from their day. Something ordinary. A smell from the kitchen. A sound from the hallway. A moment from their commute. People shared things like the way the grocery store freezer doors fogged up, or the scratchy feel of a sweater tag, or the look of early sunlight hitting a mailbox. When they read their memories out loud, the whole room leaned closer. Those tiny moments felt more alive than some of the full scenes we had read earlier. I think that helped everyone understand how small details shape the emotional layer of writing more than people realize.

That night also helped me understand why this work still keeps my attention after so many years. Writing is made of small moments. Feedback is too. They both grow from paying attention.

After a few years of doing these sessions, I started noticing something I had never paid attention to before. People arrived carrying more than their notebooks. They carried the rest of their day with them. You could see it in their shoulders or their pacing or the way they set their pens down. Someone who had a stressful day at work would flip through their pages too fast. Someone who felt lonely at home would linger on every little line they wrote. Someone who felt proud about something would sit a little taller. I realized that part of giving a writing critique meant noticing the person just as much as the page. If I ignored that part, the notes would never land the way they should.

One night a guy named Terrence came in looking exhausted. He plopped into the chair and said he almost skipped the session because he felt like everything he wrote that week was terrible. I told him to read anyway. Halfway through his piece, the whole room got quiet. The writing had this tired honesty running through it. It was raw in a way we did not usually hear from him. When he finished, he dragged his hand across his face and said he knew it was weak. I shook my head and said he might not see it yet, but the writing had more truth in it than anything he had brought before. He stared at me like I was joking. Then someone else spoke up and said they felt the exact same thing. Moments like that remind me how often we misjudge our own work, especially when we are tired or overwhelmed.

There was also a woman named Jessa who always apologized before reading. Every single time. She would say things like, “It is not very good,” or “I wrote this fast,” or “I am sorry if it does not make sense.” One night I asked her to try something different. I told her to hand me the pages and let someone else read them for her. She hesitated but eventually agreed. When another person read her story out loud, the strength of her natural voice became impossible to ignore. Everything she doubted suddenly sounded solid, clear, and full of personality. When the reader finished, Jessa looked stunned. I told her that sometimes we do not hear our own power because we are too busy scanning for mistakes. She nodded slowly, almost as if she was trying to memorize the feeling of being heard in a new way.

There is something special about the moment a writer realizes their work is better than they thought. It is like watching a light turn on inside them. Their shoulders shift. Their breathing changes. They start thinking forward instead of backward. That shift does not happen from harsh advice. It happens from a mix of honesty and encouragement. I am not talking about praising everything. That does not help anyone. But pointing out what is working creates a foundation that makes people ready to hear what can be improved.

At some point the sessions started including short exercises because people asked for more hands on practice. One of the most surprising exercises to me was something I called “the switch.” I told everyone to take a paragraph they wrote and rewrite only the last sentence. Nothing else. Just the final line. The idea was to show how endings shape the meaning of everything before them. People groaned at first, but by the end of the night, they started realizing how one sentence could change the tone of the whole piece. Someone turned a sad paragraph into something hopeful. Someone else turned a quiet scene into something funny. Another person sharpened a moment that had been too vague before. It proved how little changes can make big differences.

I used another variation during a night when everyone seemed stuck in their heads. I asked them to write a paragraph where every sentence began with the same word. It was weird and a little silly, but it forced people to break out of their patterns. One writer told me afterward that she discovered a rhythm she did not know she had. That kind of discovery does not show up unless you try something that feels slightly uncomfortable.

There were evenings where the group felt more like a family gathering than a workshop. People brought snacks. Someone once brought a tiny Bluetooth speaker and played soft instrumental music in the background. At first I thought it might be distracting, but it actually made the room feel peaceful. People took their time reading. They paused more. They listened differently. It amazed me how small environmental changes could affect the way people shared their work.

One thing that still makes me smile is how often writers do not realize how funny they are. Humor shows up in unexpected ways. A simple line delivered flat on the page can make a room burst out laughing when read aloud. Sometimes I would stop a person mid sentence and say, “Do you hear that? That timing right there is your natural humor.” They would look at me with this mix of confusion and pride. Acknowledging those small pieces helps people understand who they are on the page.

The longer I did this work, the more I saw patterns in how people learn. Some need to talk an idea out loud before they can write it. Some need silence. Some need a messy draft to get moving. Some need to plan everything ahead of time. And some, like me, figure it out halfway through the page. There is no right or wrong way. The trick is to help people find what works for them instead of forcing them into someone else’s method. That is something I remind the group often. Writing grows best when it grows in its natural shape.

There was a night when someone asked me how I stay patient after hearing the same struggles again and again. I laughed and said I do not think of it as repetition. I think of it as being part of someone’s process. People loop. They circle the same problem until one day it finally clicks. When that moment happens, you can feel the shift in the room. Everyone sits up a little straighter. People exchange glances. It is like watching someone open a door they thought was locked forever.

On one of those nights, a quiet man named Samuel surprised all of us. He usually wrote short pieces that felt distant, almost like he was standing too far away from his own scenes. But one day he brought a story that was so personal it felt like he had stepped into the center of the room for the first time. When he read it, people leaned in so hard I thought they might fall forward. The story had heat, weight, and emotion, the kind he had been missing before. When I gave him feedback, I did not talk about structure or grammar. I just told him I saw him for the first time in his work. He nodded without speaking. That night he moved from being someone who wrote for himself to someone who wrote to connect.

Moments like that shape the way I think about everything. They remind me why I never want my writing critique to sound like a checklist. It needs to sound like a conversation. Something warm. Something that acknowledges where the writer is right now and where they want to go.

There was a point when I started keeping little notes after each session. Not about the writing itself, but about the reactions. I wanted to remember the exact moment when someone’s face changed or when the room shifted. Those were the things that stayed with me long after the pages were packed up. I kept that notebook in my backpack, and every time I flipped through it, I felt like I was reading the story of how people grow. It reminded me that feedback only works when the person feels seen, not managed.

One night, a writer named Lucy read a story about a broken friendship. Her voice shook a little, and she kept losing her place. I could tell the piece meant more to her than she wanted to admit. The story itself had strong lines, but the emotional moments came in sharp bursts instead of a steady flow. After she finished, she tucked her hair behind her ear and said she knew something felt off but could not figure out what. When I talked to her about it, I focused on the truth she was trying to reach. I said the emotional core was there but she kept stepping away from it too quickly. I used a variation about staying with your feeling just one second longer before moving on. She nodded like she understood and then said she had been doing that in her real life too, pulling back too fast. That connection hit her so clearly that the whole room went quiet. Feedback moments like that go beyond the page.

There were lighter nights too. Someone once brought in a story written entirely from the point of view of a stubborn dog. It was hilarious, and the group could barely keep straight faces while listening. What made it even better was how committed the writer was to the bit. He read the lines with so much energy that I swear you could almost see the tail wagging. When I gave him a writing critique, I focused on how well he captured the dog’s logic. I also pointed out a few places where tightening the rhythm would make the humor land even stronger. He laughed and said he never thought rhythm mattered in comedy. But after he edited those parts, the whole piece snapped into place. Watching that transformation from funny to funnier was one of the joys of the job.

Another time we did an exercise where I asked everyone to write a paragraph using only sensory detail. No opinions. No explanations. Just what they could hear, smell, see, or feel. At first people groaned because it sounded too simple. But once they started reading their results out loud, the room got quiet in a completely different way. Someone described the sound of a bus braking in the rain. Someone else wrote about the sharp smell of apples in a grocery store. Another person described the warmth of a coffee cup held too tightly. When those descriptions filled the air, the group understood how much detail can shape the tone of a story without a single piece of analysis attached. Sensory writing makes people lean in. It brings the world closer.

There was a young man who joined us one winter. His name was Riley. He always wore headphones around his neck, even when he was not listening to anything. His work had this restless pace to it, like he was always tapping his foot under the table. He wrote about characters who moved fast, talked fast, and lived fast. But underneath that speed, there was this fragile thread that made his writing interesting. When I talked to him, I said his pacing worked because it matched the characters’ world, but he needed to give readers a few places to breathe. He nodded slowly, like the idea was new but made sense. A few weeks later he brought in a story with a single quiet moment in the middle, just one pause. That pause changed everything. Even he seemed surprised by how much weight it added.

People often ask me what the biggest struggle is for new writers. They expect me to say plot or grammar or story structure. But honestly, the biggest struggle is trust. Trusting yourself. Trusting the reader. Trusting the process. Trusting that your weird idea might actually be the thing that works. Writers tend to apologize for the exact parts that make their voice special. They smooth the rough edges that should stay. They hide the lines that feel too honest. When I see that, I try to guide them back to the heart of their work. I remind them that writing only breathes when it feels real.

During one session, the group started talking about how people choose what to write next. Someone said they start with a scene that feels vivid. Someone else said they start with a question they want answered. Another person said they start by copying the rhythm of a song they heard earlier in the day. Listening to those different approaches reminded me of how wide writing really is. There is no single doorway into a story. There are hundreds. You just have to choose the one that feels natural to you.

I sometimes share a silly memory from my early workshops. In the first year, I used to bring sticky notes with quick phrases on them. Things like “try slowing down here” or “what does this moment smell like” or “your character wants something, name it.” I would slide those notes across the table to people. Sometimes they would tape them to their notebooks. Someone even stuck one to the dashboard of their car. Over time, though, I stopped using notes because I realized the real power was in the conversation, not the phrases. Still, every once in a while, someone from those early days messages me to say they still have one of those notes tucked away somewhere.

The more I work with writers, the more I notice how shared the experience really is. Everyone thinks their problems are unique, but they are not. A writer who overthinks has the same struggle as someone who rushes. A writer who fears making mistakes has the same struggle as someone who rewrites endlessly. These problems all come from wanting your work to be good, which is not a bad thing at all. The trick is to show people how to aim for growth instead of perfection. Perfection kills more stories than anything else.

There was one night when the group laughed so hard that we could not get back on track for a good ten minutes. Someone misread a line and accidently turned a serious sentence into something completely ridiculous. It broke the tension in the room, and everyone loosened up. After that, the feedback for the rest of the night felt lighter and more honest. I wish I could bottle that kind of moment. It shows how laughter and learning often work together. People forget that writing can be fun.

A writer named Claire taught me something important about confidence. She brought a piece that was rough around the edges but had a strong emotional pull. When she read it, she kept stopping to say she hated how it sounded. But everyone in the room loved it. They kept pointing out why it worked. She sat there with her arms folded as if she did not believe any of us. I finally said, “You do not have to love it today. Just let it exist.” She took a breath, nodded, and set her pages down. Three sessions later, she read the revised version, and it was stunning. She told me afterward that the hardest part was letting the first draft breathe without tearing it apart too fast. I think that is true for many writers. Growth happens when you step back for a second.

After a while I realized that every group develops its own personality. Some circles leaned toward humor. Others leaned toward deep, personal stories. Some had people who liked to debate tiny details for way too long. Others moved fast and reacted more with emotion than analysis. I liked all of them for different reasons. It reminded me that writing is shaped by the people around you just as much as the page itself. If the environment feels open, the writing becomes braver. If it feels stiff, the writing shrinks. That is why I always pay attention to the tone in the room before we start.

One group met on Tuesday nights in the upstairs room of a little community center. The lighting was uneven and the chairs squeaked more than anyone liked, but the atmosphere was great. People brought tea, cookies, whatever they had at home. The group had this energy where everyone cheered each other on, even when the writing needed a lot of work. There was one evening where a man named Henry read a story so tangled that none of us could follow it, not even him. Instead of shutting down, he laughed so hard he nearly cried. The room burst into laughter with him. When it came time to give a writing critique, I focused on the parts that made sense and told him how to simplify the rest. He listened closely, still smiling, and said he had been trying too hard to sound impressive. Sometimes trying too hard becomes the problem.

There were also evenings when someone brought something unexpectedly honest. That happened once when a woman named Raquel shared a letter she never meant to show anyone. She said she wrote it as a way to clear her head. It was raw and had sentences that ran too long, but it had a beating heart in every line. When she finished reading, she folded the paper with shaky hands and looked down. People took turns talking about what moved them. Nobody spoke sharply. Nobody suggested big changes. They simply reflected what they heard. Sometimes feedback is not about fixing anything. It is about letting the writer know that their words reached someone.

I once had a writer named Logan who wrote everything like a sprint. Short sentences. Quick images. Abrupt endings. When he talked, though, he had this slow, thoughtful way about him. His writing and his personality did not match at all. One night I asked him if he could write a paragraph the way he talked. He stared at me like he had never considered that idea. He tried it. The next week he arrived grinning because he felt a shift. His writing had found a rhythm that felt like him instead of something he thought he was supposed to sound like. That is one of the good variations I use sometimes. Write the way you actually are, not the way you imagine writers should be.

Then there was the night I learned how powerful silence can be. A writer named Myra brought in a story she wrote about her childhood. It was full of detail and emotion, but when she read it out loud, she stopped halfway through because her voice shook. I told her she did not have to finish. After a long pause, she looked up and said she wanted to try again. The room stayed quiet as she found her breath. When she finished, the silence that followed felt almost sacred. Nobody rushed to comment. Nobody tried to jump in. We waited because the moment needed space. When I finally spoke, I talked about the strength of her voice and how the honesty carried more power than any polished structure could. She nodded with tears in her eyes. That night taught me that sometimes the best writing moments happen between the words.

There was another session I remember for its weird start. Someone had locked the main door, so everyone had to enter through the back hallway. The hallway smelled a little like old cardboard and copier ink. People joked about the strange entrance and carried that loose, silly mood into the session. It ended up being one of the most productive nights we ever had. People were relaxed. They took risks. They read with more confidence. It reminded me how unpredictable creativity can be. A strange hallway, a random smell, a shared laugh. All of those things shift the energy.

At some point, I started noticing how much people listened to each other. Not just politely. Really listened. I think writers are natural observers. They pick up on tone, pacing, tiny emotional cues. When someone read, the rest of the room reacted without even trying. A small inhale during a strong line. A quiet chuckle during a funny moment. A soft exhale when something sad hit just right. Those reactions taught me more about a piece than anything on the page. I often point that out during a writing critique. I tell the writer, “Listen to how the room reacted. That is your guide.”

One of the most surprising lessons I learned was that people often underestimate how much the reader can handle. Writers soften emotional moments because they worry about being too much. They shorten descriptions because they think readers will get bored. They skip over conflict because they do not want to sound dramatic. When I notice that pattern, I tell them to trust the reader more. Trust that people understand nuance. Trust that readers feel things. Trust that a strong moment will not overwhelm anyone. That simple idea opens doors for people. It helps them take risks they avoided before.

There was a writer named Paul who always held back. His stories were thoughtful but too gentle. Nothing ever pushed. One session I asked him what his character feared most in the scene. The question startled him. He said he never thought about fear in writing. The next week he came back with a new scene where the tension came through clearly. He looked proud, almost relieved, like he had been waiting for someone to tell him it was okay to dig deeper.

As the group grew, I also learned that sharing your work in front of others teaches you something you cannot learn alone. You start to understand what feels real in your writing and what feels forced. You feel where the room responds. You notice what people remember after you are done. Those moments shape your instincts. They sharpen your sense of what matters. It is one thing to read your own work in silence. It is another to feel a room breathe with you.

And somewhere along the way, I realized that all of these sessions, all of these nights watching people grow, changed me too. I became more patient. More observant. More willing to let things unfold slowly. I even learned how to trust myself better as a writer. Not from anything I wrote, but from helping others see what they were capable of.

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There was a stretch of time when people started asking me to run one on one sessions because they said they felt less nervous talking privately. At first I did not know how I felt about doing that. The group setting had a special kind of energy that came from everyone learning together. But after a while, I realized the quieter space helped certain people open up in ways they never would have with others around. The first person who asked for a solo session was a man named Elliott. He worked long hours at a local hardware store and said he wrote late at night after everyone in the house was asleep. His stories were full of small, careful moments. Lots of little observations. He reminded me of someone who watches the world more than he speaks.

When he read his pages out loud, he kept stopping halfway through a sentence to apologize. He said his ideas felt scattered. I listened closely and realized the writing was not scattered at all. It was simply gentle. The problem was not the page. It was the way he kept doubting himself before he reached the end of a thought. When I gave him feedback, I talked about letting his sentences breathe. I told him he did not have to hurry. The room had time for him. I saw something shift in his posture. His shoulders lowered a little. His voice steadied. By the third session, he read without stopping, and the difference felt like watching someone finally take a deep breath after holding it all day.

There was also a woman named Jenna who surprised me because she talked faster than she wrote. She always arrived with a stack of colorful sticky notes stuck to the edges of her pages. Her work had this bright spark to it, but she second guessed every choice. One afternoon she told me she rewrote the same scene fourteen times because she wanted it to feel just right. I said something I learned myself the hard way. I told her that sometimes you learn more from writing a new page than from fixing the same old one. She laughed and said she knew that was true but hated admitting it. The next week she brought something brand new, and her whole face glowed the moment she started reading. It felt like she had finally let herself play again.

One of the most memorable one on one sessions happened with a young writer named Tay. He said he grew up in a loud household and learned to keep most of his thoughts inside. His writing had a quiet power, but it also held back at emotional points. When I asked him why he thought that happened, he shrugged and said he never wanted his writing to feel needy. That word stuck with me. Needy. I told him that writing is not needy when it shows emotion. It is honest. He looked at me with this startled expression, like he had never heard anyone put it that way. The next piece he brought felt like a door had opened inside him. The emotion was still subtle, but it was real. You could feel it in the pauses and the rhythm.

There were days when I wondered how I ended up spending so much time helping other people with their writing. I still wrote my own things, but it became clear that watching people grow gave me a different kind of joy. I liked seeing someone solve a problem they thought would defeat them. I liked watching their reactions when something finally made sense. One day someone joked that I should call myself a coach. I laughed because I never liked titles, but the truth is that coaching was exactly what I had been doing without realizing it.

Sometimes I think back to the first session I ever led. I remember how nervous I felt. I remember worrying that I was not good enough or knowledgeable enough. But now, after years of watching so many different writers show up with their whole hearts on the page, the nervousness feels like something from another lifetime. Not because I think I know everything. Honestly, I feel like I know less than I used to. But I learned how to listen better. And listening changed everything.

There was a moment not long ago when I realized how important it is for writers to hear their own growth. A man named Kyle came to me with a stack of old drafts. He said he felt stuck and wanted to quit writing altogether. I asked him to read the oldest draft first. Then I asked him to read the newest one. Halfway through, he stopped and stared at the page. He said he could not believe the difference. He had been so focused on what still needed work that he never noticed how much he had improved. That is a trap a lot of writers fall into. They look ahead so hard that they forget to look back.

I use a variation sometimes where I ask people to keep a separate file just for moments they are proud of. Not whole stories. Just their favorite lines. Their favorite images. Their favorite emotional beats. People think it sounds silly at first. But then, a few weeks later, they tell me those little collections help them believe in themselves when the rest of the writing feels messy. Confidence builds quietly. It does not arrive with a big announcement. It sneaks in through moments you barely notice.

Another thing I learned over the years is that writers often need someone to say out loud what they already know deep down. A woman named Shea brought a piece that had a strong beginning and a strong ending, but the middle felt thin. She frowned every time she looked at it. When I asked her what she thought was wrong, she sighed and said the middle felt rushed but she did not want to slow it down. I asked her why. She said she was scared people would get bored. I told her that if the emotional core is strong, readers will follow you anywhere. She stared at the table for a long moment, then nodded slowly. When she came back the next week with a fuller, deeper middle section, the whole piece finally felt alive.

There was a night recently when the power flickered during a session. The lights dimmed long enough for everyone to glance at each other. Instead of stopping, someone turned on the flashlight on their phone and held it toward the person reading. Then someone else added another. Soon the whole room was glowing with little beams of light. The person reading said it felt strange but also comforting. I said that writing sometimes feels exactly like that. You speak into the dark and trust that someone will hold up a little light for you. And people usually do.

I think about that moment a lot because it captures what these spaces are about. Writing feels personal and sometimes lonely, but when you share it, the loneliness lifts. People show up for you in ways you never expect. And each time they do, your confidence grows a little more. Growth rarely happens because of one big moment. It comes from a hundred small ones.

There was a point not too long ago when I started thinking about why all of this mattered so much to me. I had spent years listening to other people read, watching them open up, guiding them through tangled paragraphs, and celebrating their wins. It felt natural, like something I was meant to do, even though I never planned any of it. One night after a session, I stayed behind to clean up the room. Everyone had already left, and the place felt strangely quiet. The chairs were still a little crooked. A few cookie crumbs sat on the edge of the table. Someone had forgotten a pen. I picked it up and just stood there for a moment, noticing how peaceful everything felt. It reminded me of those early days when I first realized how powerful one thoughtful writing critique could be.

I thought about all the sessions where someone found their voice for the first time. All the nights where someone said they almost did not come because they felt embarrassed by their work. All the moments when someone laughed at their own mistakes and ended up learning something important because the room felt safe enough to let them do that. I realized then that this work had shaped me more than anything I had written on my own. It had taught me patience. It had taught me presence. It had taught me to pay attention to things that are easy to miss, like the way someone’s breath catches when they read a hard sentence or the way their smile shifts when they hear a line land the right way.

After a while, I started carrying some of those lessons into my everyday life. I found myself listening more carefully when people talked. Not just to their words, but to the little pauses and hesitations. I noticed that the same things that made a paragraph work made conversations work too. Rhythm. Honesty. Space. People open up when they feel heard. They trust you when they know you are not waiting to correct them. They share more when you let them finish their thought before jumping in. All of that came from these groups, these rooms, these nights filled with people willing to read their hearts out loud.

One of the last big groups I led before taking a short break had this moment that still stays with me. A woman named Kira had struggled for months with the same problem. She wrote strong beginnings and strong endings, but her middles always felt thin and rushed. She joked once that she wished stories were only two pages long. But she kept showing up, kept trying, kept working through the awkward parts. One night she read something brand new. It started slow, almost too slow, and for a moment I thought she might lose her grip on it. But then she reached the middle, and something had changed. The pacing held. The emotion stayed steady. She had finally found the missing balance.

When she finished reading, the room went quiet. Not the confused kind of quiet. The moved kind. The kind that happens when everyone realizes they just heard a breakthrough. Someone let out a soft breath. Someone else whispered wow. Kira covered her mouth with her hand and looked down at her lap. I asked her how she felt. She shook her head and said she did not know how she did it. I smiled and said she had been building toward that moment for months. She just needed time. She needed space. And she needed people who cared enough to sit with her while she figured it out. That is something I keep reminding myself and others: growth does not always show up when you expect it. Sometimes it waits until the very last moment before revealing itself.

There were so many nights when someone would apologize for taking too long to read or for stumbling on a sentence. I always told them there was no rush. I told them the room belonged to them too. I believed that then, and I still believe it now. Feedback is not about telling someone what they did wrong. It is about reminding them what they can do right. It is about pulling their strengths to the front so the weaknesses feel less scary. It is about helping them see the possibility inside their own work. And once they see that possibility, they start chasing it.

There was another moment that stayed with me long after the session ended. A man named Jonah read a piece that he said felt pointless. He almost did not bring it at all. But as he read, the room leaned in. The piece had a softness to it, the kind that sneaks up on you. When he finished, he sighed and said he knew it was nothing special. I shook my head and told him that sometimes the best writing comes from the small places, the ones you do not think matter. That night, he told me later, kept him from giving up. It made me realize how fragile people’s confidence can be and how easily a single kind word can keep their spark alive.

What I love most about all of this is that every person who walks into a writing group brings something the rest of us could not predict. A unique rhythm. A new angle. A strange but wonderful metaphor. A moment of truth they have not shared before. And each time they share it, something in the room shifts. I like watching those shifts. I like seeing someone discover their style, even if they do not realize that is what they are doing. I like the messy drafts, the overwritten scenes, the awkward dialogue, the lines that hit too hard or not hard enough. All of it feels like part of a larger process that nobody can do alone.

My favorite variation to use, the one that seems to work almost every time, is encouraging people to ask themselves what their character wants in a scene. Not a big life goal. Just a simple desire. It could be wanting someone to listen. Wanting to leave a room. Wanting to feel brave. When writers answer that, everything else starts to fall into place. Scenes sharpen. Emotions clear. Choices make sense. It is such a small question, but it has this steady power behind it.

As I look back on all these years, I sometimes think about what would have happened if my friend never asked me to lead that first group. Maybe none of this would have happened. Maybe I would still be scribbling in notebooks without realizing how much joy there is in watching someone else grow. I am grateful for every person who walked into those rooms and shared something honest. They taught me more about writing than any book ever did. They taught me how to listen, how to slow down, how to believe in small improvements.

And if there is one thing I hope people take from all these sessions, it is that writing is not something you have to figure out alone. Growth happens in community. Confidence grows when someone hands you a gentle suggestion instead of a harsh correction. You find your voice when someone points out the parts that already shine. And you keep going because someone cared enough to sit beside you through all the messy drafts.

That is what writing communities are for. They show you what your words can do. They remind you that your voice matters. And they teach you, slowly and quietly, how to trust yourself on the page.