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# Punchlist
## General
* Add navigation/outline numbers to Session chunks (i.e. 2.1 Attribute data) (I think either GN or BL has to do this?)
* ~~Add nav links to outline (TDM)~~
* Add Glossary and Further Reading section (at end?) (I think either GN or BL has to do this?)
## Session 1
* ~~Write presentation notes (MH)~~
* ~~Add back dropdown titles (TDM)~~
* ~~Add "data" plural/singular/confusing note in a dropdown somewhere (TDM)~~
* ~~Feedback from teachers~~
* ~~It's important to look at the data behind the **mapp** (The human role in mapping, line 3) TYPO~~
* ~~Why was this data collected? What is the **datas et's agenda**? TYPO~~
* ~~put captions in format sent by Garrett (MH)~~
* ~~"What is a map?" section: fix the "data grammar" header!!!~~
* ~~Replace John Snow map with smaller file~~
* ~~Change title of course to Making Sense of Maps and Data~~
## Session 2
* ~~Record geoJSON.io exercise (SL)~~
* ~~Write presentation notes (TDM)~~
* ~~Update "Introducing the LMEC public data portal" part (TDM)~~
* ~~Repurpose "Human bias in data" section as a Conclusion for Session 2 (TDM)~~
~~* Where to put "styling" sketch, if anywhere? (**maybe before the joining sketch in session 2 section on joining**)~~
* ~~Coordinates and projections section: change "check yourself" to "Comprehension check"~~
* ~~Joins section: change "check yourself" to "Comprehension check"~~
* ~~Remove "non-response bias" from list of terms~~
* ~~Where to put full flow of humans-in-data-and-mapping sketch, if anywhere? (**maybe in Session 2 concluding thoughts???**)~~
* ~~Feedback from teachers~~
* ~~Types of feature data **Honestly, you lost me here, and I think just a tiny bit of reorganization would really help. I think the whole “a computer is not very smart” part could come earlier, because until I read that I didn’t really understand the purpose of the whole raster/vector thing. Coming from the previous page, where the data is just a list of states, that came out of left field. Then, I would go for “There are two types of feature data: raster and vector” and then define each one alongside the visual examples that follow. It’s hard to understand without the visuals and context.**~~
* ~~"In the stained-glass-world of vector data..." **This is the most helpful sentence about vector data on the page but it’s buried at the end. I would put this or a version of it earlier.**~~
* ~~Ideas for data you can draw: parks in Boston; neighborhoods; points of **interests** TYPO~~
* ~~GIS software can **these data** types; there are desktop programs like QGIS and web-based programs like Carto. TYPO~~
* put captions in format sent by Garrett
* ~~Update screenshots in Introducing the Data Portal section* Attribute data page has a weird bug where it bounces back up to the top when you scroll down~~
* ~~Add images to geojson.io exercise~~
* ~~Add titles to "Show Mores" on Feature Data and Coordinates sections~~
* add excel to attribute data fie types and software
## Session 3
* ~~Major reorg and edit (GN + BL)
* ~~Copy edit ~~
* ~~Put "Making your own metadata" as a "Read more"~~
* ~~Add in the "four ways to make a map" from Tess (see slack) to the "Further resources" section in final chunk~~
* ~~Remove "In class discussion" from final chunk~~
## Style notes
* "datasets"
* Headers are Sentence case
* Captions are Sentence case
* Session titles are Title Case
* First word after a colon: Should be capitalized
* Include citation on every instance of an image (even if repeated)
* earth is lower case
* "Consider This" on asides that are discussion-question based