# Handover

- For Ana

Check in with Connor about the post about the OT direction we were taking with Thijs. If he writes the first draft, he can move on to https://3.basecamp.com/4738529/buckets/18523847/messages/5383807718. Don't publish product posts until I get back.
- *AM: Update as of 4/11 - he's put together a first draft based on [this outline](https://hackmd.io/@n5QiPGfDQiuf5kQZ4JWOmA/Bku8gREo).*
He asked for my feedback on the [first draft](https://github.com/appsignal/appsignal-nextjs-blog/pull/678), which I left [here](https://github.com/appsignal/appsignal-nextjs-blog/pull/678#issuecomment-1303439821). He's addressed my comments [here](https://github.com/appsignal/appsignal-nextjs-blog/pull/678#issuecomment-1303568980). I'll leave this with you and Thijs to take forward. Alongside the feedback I've given, I'm not sure the tone is quite right too, can't put my finger on it - it seems a bit over-the-top and not the humble AppSignal tone we aim for, somehow?

**Connor and reviews**
On another note, I think we may need to guide Connor a little when it comes to reviews. I like the fact he makes such detailed feedback, but some of his comments are more opinion-led I reckon, rather than being suggestions for crucial changes to a post. [I left him some feedback here on a recent review](https://github.com/appsignal-writing/tech-writer-connor/pull/3#issuecomment-1299988227) and am interested in hearing your thoughts on this too.

He also pushed back against [this author's suggested expansion of a Zeitwerk topic](https://3.basecamp.com/4738529/buckets/18523847/messages/5371330369#recording5492876513), with the reason being: 'it’s not worth it as it’s not going to give readers actionable insights, just a deeper understanding of software architecture'. Would you agree with this? I think there's still value in sharing info about software architecture in posts, and we have done in previous posts.

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