--- tags: commission, apsci, rp, tenebrae, midnightConsecration --- # Rtil Tenebrae (Back) Sketch Commission ## Summary A relatively dynamic piece that shows what Tenebrae's back looks like. *(Please keep the wings on a separate layer; ideally there's a version with them and without them.)* As a rule of thumb, simplifying the design where needed is fine. ## General * **Vibe:** Carefree; general sense of freedom. (She's floating, after all!) * **Pose:** Like [this][pose-flip-parkour], but with some adjustments: * **Sense of flight,** instead of parkour - as though she's in the middle of making a turn mid-air. *(Or mid-water; a 'sharper' turn is fine, she **doesn't** have to be moving quickly!)* * **Angled with her back more towards the viewer** - whether you think this is best handled by changing the viewing angle, or having her twist her back more, is up to you. * **Arms:** Closer to/more in line with her body, since she isn't using them to support herself. * **Dress:** The tassels of her dress move as though she's moving through water. * Please make sure that the tassels don't obstruct the view of her legs or feet! Given that they're self-actuating, it's okay if some of them are at somewhat odd angles. * **Feet:** The pose given in the above ref is okay; I'd like something that at least shows one of her soles (and perhaps the side of her other foot). * Feel free to change what her feet are actually *doing* if that's more interesting to you! (Position of toes, arches, what have you.) * **Wings:** Spread; they're mostly cosmetic, but carrying that 'in flight' look would be nice. It's not a big deal, though. * **Skin:** *[Pale, as before][tenebrae-rtil-ref].* * **Proportions:** *[As before][tenebrae-rtil-ref].* ### Body * **Expression:** Upbeat smile, but not maniacally so - happy a la Madoka, but not *overjoyed* a la Madoka. * **Head:** *[As before][tenebrae-rtil-ref].* * **Eyes:** *[As before][tenebrae-rtil-ref];* that is to say, long, winged eyelashes, with sunken eyes. (I.e., they naturally look a bit 'tired', despite how upbeat she might be.) * **Wings:** Please remember that these have [a certain degree of translucency][tenebrae-inaba-refsheet] to them! ### Other * **Clothing:** As per [her reference sheet][tenebrae-inaba-refsheet]. * Please keep in mind the ribbon around her neck, and the way her mostly-backless dress looks - as well as the two 'special' tassles. (The ones with the heart cutout; they could probably go between her legs.) * **Stockings:** They should have the same "ballet flat" transparency shown there/as shown in [your prior rendition][tenebrae-rtil-ref]. ## Reference Material *Here for system reasons.* [tenebrae-inaba-refsheet]: http://refs.indulgen.se/madoka/madoka_kaname/midnightConsecration/art/~/inabasa/tenebraerevisedrefpink.png [tenebrae-rtil-ref]: http://refs.indulgen.se/madoka/madoka_kaname/midnightConsecration/art/~/rtil/candelora-tenebrae.png [pose-flip-parkour]: http://refs.indulgen.se/etc/inspiration/art/pose/acrobatic/flip/future_parkour_girl_by_sabakakrazny-d5pu37p.png