Rtil Jeanne d'Arc Alter Sketch Commission

--- title: "Rtil Jeanne d'Arc Alter Sketch Commission" tags: commission, jalter, rp, rtil --- # Jeanne Alter Details These are just the things that apply to her regardless of clothing - hopefully it makes this a little easier to sift through! ## General * **Figure:** **[T][jalter-jk-swimsuit] and [A][jalter-jk-office]** references, as one would expect~ These also work for her body in general. * **Skin:** Corpselike pallor - i.e., [very, very pale][jalter-outfit-wedding]. If you think this will conflict with the white background (as opposed to being contrasted/highlighted by how dark her armor is), then please say so! * Alternative shades/examples: [1](http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/inspiration/skin/68c24229c5326e7531c8284ab6012574.png) [2](http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/inspiration/skin/80544683_p0-rsz.png) ### Body * **Hair:** Her hair is [**short**, with no ahoge][jalter-armored-1]. * **Eyes:** * [Slit pupils and golden irises][jalter-asc3-azomo]. * **Eyeliner/Eyeshadow** along the lines of this [laughing reference][jalter-expression-laughter], giving way to the bags under her eyes. * **Fractures:** The general appearance is listed in the **Effects** section. * A few small, thin ones extend from the outer corners of both her eyes. The 'embers' don't need to be truly visible, as long as it's clear that it's not a normal wound. * **Mouth:** Eight fangs (four pairs); cf. [this reference][jalter-expression-ahegao]. Each pair should have its canine as the larger fang, with the inner tooth (towards the center) as the smaller one. * **Hands:** Nails are slightly long, painted black. (These usually aren't visible.) ### Effects * **Flames:** (Cover the cursed flames - probably coming from her left hand, upturned) * See [this reference][jalter-asc2-fire] for the kind of general appearance I'd like it to have - it should look intense, thick, even unnatural. * That reference has the wind blowing strongly towards the left, which affects how it flows. I'd generally like it to flow upwards. * The color I want is better shown on this [wedding image][jalter-outfit-wedding] (of all places). * **Fractures:** Think of this particular one of [DestinyBlue's works][destinyblue-fracture-1] - except instead of being recesses in the skin, they're generally harder, longer, straighter, and glimmers of purple embers can be seen inside. * I.e., the wound should be bleeding, but it's more like part of her "broke". ### Other * **Choker:** Technically a collar, but it looks more like a choker; it's about halfway up her neck. * Color/sheen akin to [white opal][gem-opal-white]. * Relatively thin, tight against her neck, crystalline, hard. * A couple of fractures along her neck (similar to the ones near her eyes) stretching a little ways from the collar, *straight and linear*, from when she tried to claw it off. # Rtil Jeanne Alter (Office) Sketch Commission ## Summary ## General * **Pose:** Generally like [this][nep-pose-desk], but holding a cigarette in her hand a la [this image][jalter-outfit-cig]. If you feel like drawing any of the desk, it's just a basic office desk. * The cigarette doesn't need to be especially detailed, but please make sure the tip is lit - i.e., with [violet][jalter-outfit-wedding] cinders, suggesting her own flames were used to light it. * **Pose (Variant):** Same as above, but her cock is jutting out, pushing the pencil skirt back - at the same time, her shirt is straining to hold her breasts in, buttons on the verge of popping off, cleavage showing, nipples poking out against her top, and so on~ (Milk leaking out and soaking into her top would be great, too.~) * **Figure:** Same as general. * **Figure (Variant):** [Bustier][jalter-body-bust], with an effect on her clothes. * **Cock:** As seen [here][jalter-jk-futa] - while Saber Alter's head hides the tip, it's probably filling most of her mouth. A bit of foreskin would be nice, alongside a fat dot of pre at the tip. ### Body * **Expression:** Looking at the viewer - mostly akin to one of [JK's images][jalter-jk-ugh] - spiteful, indignant, but restraining it. A slightly harsher frown, and no blush, would be appropriate here. * **Expression (Variant):** Akin to [this][jalter-body-bust], blushing heavily.~ (If you can get a set of two fangs in - perhaps biting her lip, if needed - that would be wonderful!) * **Hair:** Contrary to my normal preference, an ahoge would be great here~ ### Other * **Clothing:** Mostly akin to [this image][jalter-jk-office], by JK. That is, the pencil skirt, blazer, pantyhose, and stiletto heels come from that. * **Shirt:** Basically just a simple white button-up - just with ['ruffles'][outfit-shirt-vic] to the sides of the buttons, thinner than those in that image. I **think** this would be hidden by her tie, though, so it'd likely only matter on the variant. * **Tie:** I'd like her to have [this pendant][jalter-jk-ugh] pinned somewhere on her tie - somewhere near the top or bottom, whichever you think looks best. (Notably, do what you think is best with this on the variant - remove it, untie it, leave it where it is, whatever seems appealing to you.) ## Reference Material *Here for system reasons.* [jalter-body-bust]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/inspiration/proportions/304b2adab694d62943c32edcc9155c3a-rsz.png [jalter-outfit-cig]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/outfit/dress/71849670_p0-rsz.jpg [jalter-jk-futa]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/proportions/nsfw/rjdiilaumaq41.png [jalter-jk-office]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/outfit/office/73568213_p0.png [jalter-jk-ugh]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/inspiration/69990934_p0.png [nep-pose-desk]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/inspiration/pose/neptune_drawn_by_kludea__ab633d241da68ddcaab2755b4d6abffd-hf.jpg [outfit-shirt-vic]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/inspiration/outfit/victorian_71CR81p5AL._AC_UX522.jpg --- # Rtil Jeanne Alter (Armored) Sketch Commission ## Summary (Looking down at someone, sword in her right hand, flame in her left) ## General * **Vibe:** Menacing, arrogant, sadistic; a touch unhinged. * **Pose:** (Still finding a ref!) (Looking down on the viewer, or similar...I know I have something that'd do.) ### Body * **Expression:** (Still finding a ref!) (Condescending, smug, self-assured, eyes glimmering with malice...) ### Other * **Armor:** If I don't specify, it's safe to assume [this image][jalter-armored-1] is the base for most of these details. [This second ascension image][jalter-armored-2] shows her from another angle, and without her cloak, which lets you see the fabric attached to her armor. * *The detailing on this doesn't have to be perfect - it's a sketch, after all. If you don't feel like drawing things down to every last rivet, that's perfectly fine!* * **Cloak:** Do whatever feels right, honestly. Strictly speaking, it doesn't even have to be there; it's not the focus of the piece. But it *is* nice to have. * **Gauntlets:** The general look should be the [earlier image][jalter-armored-1], but with sharp, intimidating fingers akin to [this one][jalter-asc3-azomo]. * **Greaves:** The greaves should roughly be the ones from her [third ascension][jalter-asc3-azomo], with both legs armored. * If that image isn't clear enough, the shape/proportions on [a different 3rd ascension design][jalter-asc3-full] might help - though I'd like her heels to be thicker and more practical. * **Sheath:** Most images don't give a good look, so [here's the canon design][jalter-weapon-sword]. * **Flag:** *Not present in this image.* * **Sword:** Design [as per canon][jalter-weapon-sword] (far left); length as per [this official image][jalter-asc1-official]. ## Reference Material *Here for system reasons.* [destinyblue-fracture-1]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/inspiration/fracture/2CIUZzt.jpg [jalter-expression-ahegao]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/expression/ahegao/tumblr_dd3b9172bd598a65a3fff9438ea1633c_f4cef62f_1280-cropped.jpg [jalter-expression-laughter]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/expression/crazed/74373323_p0.png [jalter-armored-1]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/inspiration/60599604_p0-flip.jpg [jalter-armored-2]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/asc2/80004190_p1.jpg [jalter-asc1-official]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/asc1/JeanneDArcAlter_Arcade_Stage1.png [jalter-asc2-fire]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/fire/65179698_p0.jpg [jalter-asc3-azomo]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/asc3/79939818_p0.jpg [jalter-asc3-full]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/asc3/62722194_p0.jpg [jalter-jk-swimsuit]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/proportions/77022475_p0.png [jalter-outfit-wedding]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/inspiration/fire/69339979_p4.png [jalter-weapon-flag]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/weapon/Jalterflag.png [jalter-weapon-sword]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/weapon/Jaltersword.png [gem-opal-white]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/inspiration/collar/opal-gem-462139a.jpg ---