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title: Rtil Jeanne d'Arc Alter (Nude) Sketch Commission
tags: [' jalter', ' rp', commission, ' rtil']

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title: "Rtil Jeanne d'Arc Alter (Nude) Sketch Commission"
tags: commission, jalter, rp, rtil
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# Jeanne Alter Commission Details
I apologize for the mess - I'll probably want to redo this in the future...

## General
* **Pose:** Roughly #10 in [this sheet of poses][pose-sheet-1].
    * **Head:** Nose slightly upturned; looking to the side a la [this portrait][jalter-portrait-condescending], peering at the viewer out of the corner of her eye.
* **Figure:** **[T][jalter-jk-swimsuit] and [A][jalter-jk-office]** references, as one would expect~ These also work for her body in general.
    * **Breasts:**
        * Pierced nipples - with her [her pendant's symbol][jalter-fishine-ugh] to be hanging each (either from a bar or a ring, whichever you think looks better); it shouldn't be too big.
    * **Cock:** A la [this art][jalter-fishine-futa], again - erect, jutting up at an angle, with the underside visible.
        * Pierced with a [prince albert][aya-futa-piercings], but with a curved barbell (not a full ring). Also, a [jacob's ladder](https://i.imgur.com/TJshy.jpg) on the shaft.
* **Skin:** Corpselike pallor - i.e., [very, very pale][jalter-outfit-wedding]. If you think this will conflict with the white background (as opposed to being contrasted/highlighted by how dark her armor is), then please say so!
    * Alternative shades/examples: [1](http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/inspiration/skin/68c24229c5326e7531c8284ab6012574.png) [2](http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/inspiration/skin/80544683_p0-rsz.png)

### Body
* **Expression:** Cold, distant disdain, as if to say "you're disgusting for enjoying this" - but with a bit of a blush to show that she's not as above it all as she'd like to seem.
* **Hair:** Her hair is [**short**, with no ahoge][jalter-xanadu-burns].
* **Eyes:**
    * [Slit pupils and golden irises][jalter-asc3-azomo].
    * **Eyeliner/Eyeshadow** along the lines of [this][jalter-jk-grail] (or [this][jalter-expression-laughter]), giving way to the bags under her eyes.
* **Mouth:** Eight fangs (four pairs); cf. [this reference][jalter-expression-ahegao]. Each pair should have its canine as the larger fang, with the inner tooth (towards the center) as the smaller one.
* **Fractures:** A la [one of Xanadu's works][jalter-xanadu-burns] - or the **Effects** section.
    * A few small, thin ones extend down from both both her eyes. The 'embers' don't need to be truly visible, as long as it's clear that it's not a normal wound.
* **Hands:** Nails are [slightly long, painted black][jalter-xanadu-burns].

### Effects
* **Flames:** ***Not relevant in this particular piece.***
    * See [this reference][jalter-asc2-fire] for the kind of general appearance I'd like it to have - it should look intense, thick, even unnatural.
        * That reference has the wind blowing strongly towards the left, which affects how it flows. I'd generally like it to flow upwards.
    * The color I want is better shown on this [wedding image][jalter-outfit-wedding] (of all places).
* **Fractures:** Think of this particular one of [DestinyBlue's works][destinyblue-fracture-1] - except instead of being recesses in the skin, they're generally harder, longer, straighter, and glimmers of purple embers can be seen inside.
    * I.e., the wound should be bleeding, but it's more like part of her "broke".

### Other
* **Choker:** Technically a collar, but it looks more like a choker; it's about halfway up her neck.
    * Color/sheen akin to [white opal][gem-opal-white].
    * Relatively thin, tight against her neck, crystalline, hard.
    * A couple of fractures along her neck (similar to the ones near her eyes) stretching a little ways from the collar, *straight and linear*, from when she tried to claw it off.

## Reference Material
*Here for system reasons.*


[destinyblue-fracture-1]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/inspiration/fracture/2CIUZzt.jpg
[jalter-expression-ahegao]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/expression/ahegao/tumblr_dd3b9172bd598a65a3fff9438ea1633c_f4cef62f_1280-cropped.jpg
[jalter-expression-laughter]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/expression/crazed/74373323_p0.png
[jalter-armored-1]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/inspiration/60599604_p0-flip.jpg
[jalter-armored-2]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/asc2/80004190_p1.jpg
[jalter-asc1-official]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/asc1/JeanneDArcAlter_Arcade_Stage1.png
[jalter-asc2-fire]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/fire/65179698_p0.jpg
[jalter-asc3-azomo]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/asc3/79939818_p0.jpg
[jalter-asc3-full]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/asc3/62722194_p0.jpg
[jalter-jk-swimsuit]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/proportions/77022475_p0.png
[jalter-outfit-wedding]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/inspiration/fire/69339979_p4.png
[jalter-weapon-flag]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/weapon/Jalterflag.png
[jalter-weapon-sword]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/weapon/Jaltersword.png
[gem-opal-white]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/inspiration/collar/opal-gem-462139a.jpg

[jalter-body-bust]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/inspiration/proportions/304b2adab694d62943c32edcc9155c3a-rsz.png
[jalter-outfit-cig]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/outfit/dress/71849670_p0-rsz.jpg
[jalter-fishine-futa]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/proportions/nsfw/rjdiilaumaq41.png
[jalter-jk-office]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/outfit/office/73568213_p0.png
[jalter-fishine-ugh]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/inspiration/69990934_p0.png
[nep-pose-desk]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/inspiration/pose/neptune_drawn_by_kludea__ab633d241da68ddcaab2755b4d6abffd-hf.jpg
[outfit-shirt-vic]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/inspiration/outfit/victorian_71CR81p5AL._AC_UX522.jpg

[pose-sheet-1]: http://refs.indulgen.se/etc/inspiration/art/pose/3dcd8018b50a43263e5f4ae1f0c190ca.jpg
[jalter-jk-grail]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/proportions/eyes/__jeanne_d_arc_drawn_by_j_k__11141fb3213e9c062151fc13ff2281ad.jpg
[jalter-portrait-condescending]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/art/portrait/74867522_p0.jpg

[jalter-xanadu-burns]: http://refs.indulgen.se/fate/jeanne/alter/judiciumInficio/art/~/xanaduavici/Jalter_Back_no_seal.png

[aya-futa-piercings]: https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=4913913