# IELTS Advanced - Assignment 7

## Part 1 - Fixes writing tasks

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Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level.
***Do you agree or disagree?***
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There are arguments that indicate music, art, and drama are equally important as other subjects in primary schools. This essay shows a strong agreement with the opinion because they could help the students improve their way of thinking and career development.

First of all, a student who spends their time in study art-related subjects has better-thinking methods. This is because students can learn the way to enjoy and comprehend the artworks, hence they will have different ways of viewing them. Many studies show that students have art-related knowledge backgrounds are better problem solvers and their solutions are more creative.

Next, if a student has learned music, art, and drama subjects, they have more career options in the future. After graduating from school, they are able to work as a musician, a composer, a painter, etc. For instance, the education systems of both Japan and Korea allow their students to learn such subjects as much as other primary subjects, as a result, their entertainment industry is the most developed among other Asia countries.

In conclusion, this essay's agreement comes from the positive impact of learning art-related subjects and the fact that students who have learned them can expand their options in career paths.

## Part 2 - Speaking

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## Part 3 - Writing

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Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries.
***What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?***
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In developing countries, multinational companies are gradually common. This fact can come with an advantage in product distribution and a drawback of market domination.

The ability of product distribution to developing countries could be considered a good point. When a company or organization has a branch office in those countries, the process of product transportation can be significantly less expensive. For example, the price of Muji products has a huge decreased after Muji opened its official store in Vietnam.

About the drawback, the existence of multinational companies can dominate the market share of other domestic companies. The reason for this fact comes from these multinational companies having famous and well-known products which are preferred by the domestic consumers. Especially in Vietnam, where more than half of customers who are asked choose products of international organizations rather than domestic ones.

In conclusion, when a multinational company comes to a developing country, they can deliver their product more easily. As a consequence, decreased price and popularity of their famous is going to dominate domestic products then leads to market share domination.

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There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children.
***Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couples who decide to do this***
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**Introduction:**
- **Rephrasing**:
- married couples = young families
- to have children = to give birth
- **Keywords mentioning:**
- **Advantage**: lower the financial liabilities
- **Disadvantage**: make population of their country becomes old
**Advantage:**
- **Topic sentence**:
- Lower the financial liabilities
- **Explaination**:
- cut required budgets for the child => No more stress about overspend financial budgets
- **Example:**
- Surveys show that many married couples do not have so much stress about their financial capability when they decided to not have their kid
**Disadvantage:**
- **Topic sentence**: Less the baby is given birth, More older the population
- **Explaination**: Less human resource for the labour market, percentage of old people dominates ratio.
- **Example**: Many countries especially Finland, France, Japan have encountered the problem and these countries's goverments have to encourage their citizen to give birth
**Conclusion:**
- Rephrase the advantage and disadvantages.

## Part 4 - Suffixes and Prefixes