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title: Character Art Feedback
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https://i.imgur.com/l1BglSK.jpg - Alphonse
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# Character Art Feedback

**Chair -** Dang, this looks sweet :)

**Sensei -** These came out beautifully! There're some minor things that I'd like to experiment with, but none of it's all that substantial. Comments & feedback for each character is below.

## Character Designs

**Note -** Each image is linked to the related feedback section, in case there's any confusion.

<div style="display: grid; grid-template-columns: repeat(3, auto)">
    <a href="#Nicki-Bianchi"><img src="https://i.imgur.com/4PcXiOX.jpg" /></a>
    <a href="#Lionel-Manning"><img src="https://i.imgur.com/xfou689.jpg" /></a>
    <a href="#Assata-Lune"><img src="https://i.imgur.com/JVqukIK.jpg" /></a>
    <a href="#Will-Powers"><img src="https://i.imgur.com/t7O27bt.jpg" /></a>
    <a href="#Amos-+-Alphonse"><img src="https://i.imgur.com/sanfxu4.jpg" /></a>
    <a href="#Amos-+-Alphonse"><img src="https://i.imgur.com/l1BglSK.jpg" /></a>
</div>

## Feedback

### Nicki Bianchi

I think the white hair w/ purple streak was a great choice, along with the matching outfit.

It could just be the style, but Nicki looks a little *too* skinny for my liking. Her level of fitness is perfect, but I'd like to see her with a slightly more realistic figure. (If you prefer/are more comfortable drawing women with this shape, that's fine by me - I'd rather you draw the characters in the style that way you're familiar with.)

The alternative would be use a more cartoony/exhaggerated style, akin to the original Moon Girl design that the previous artist came up with - but I think I prefer the more grounded style that you've used so far.

### Lionel Manning

Lionel's definitely one to have his eyebrow raised.

My only concern is that his hair looks a little too anime-like—I think that's the right hair length, but I'd prefer it closer to Amos' hair style (matted down w/ a cowlick). Somewhere between what he has now & Amos' hair would be great.

### Assata Lune

Probably my favorite of the group; her figure captures something about her age that feels more subtle than e.g. Alphonse's figure, and her outfit/colors feel slightly dated (Boomer/Gen X as opposed to Millenial/Gen Z).

No changes necessary.

### Will Powers

Nails that menacing phyical presence, and the slight double chin is great.

I like the choice of tie color, and it's gotten me thinking about some alternative color schemes for Powers' suit. I'd like to see how he looks with a slightly brighter blue suit & red tie—basically, a palette that's more reminiscent of [the US flag](https://www.flagcolorcodes.com/usa). He shouldn't outright match the colors of the flag—they're probably too bright to look serious on a suit—but it'd be funny if he got close to it. If this change sacrifices too much of his dark & menacing energy, then we'll stick with what we have here.

Here's another [image of Jeff](https://www.washingtonian.com/wp-content/uploads/2016/01/bezos-1.jpg) for inspiration. (Powers' tie doesn't have to be patterned like this, but I'm open to it if it looks good.)


### Amos + Alphonse

These two look good. You nailed the outfits (especially the boots), and I like the touch with Alphonse's glasses.

My only concern here is with Alphonse's weight—I'd like to see him with slightly less of a beer belly (still overweight, but a little less so). He's a middle aged family man with a severe case of dad bod, but he's still a physical laborer in a demanding role so his body shouldn't be too unwieldly.
