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# System prepended metadata

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## DSH Docs typos

https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/index.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/UtDxzSq.png)

https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/investigator/index.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/ZCV6Q3J.png)

Should also include outputs in def of work package
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/project_manager/project_lifecycle.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/caTAopi.png)

https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/project_manager/data_ingress.html#
![](https://i.imgur.com/kjiaBG3.png)

https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/researcher/user_guide_guacamole.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/guJ76GM.png)

Should highlight that you'll need to be able to receive calls later if you use phone option
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/researcher/user_guide_guacamole.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/jdVrZKK.png)

Should also say 'You can try again by clicking "reconnect"'
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/researcher/user_guide_msrds.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/unzNfEl.png)

'Projects participants' => 'Project participants'
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/researcher/user_guide_msrds.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/6aDCtbk.png)

'done in done'
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/system_deployer/deploy_shm.html#explanation-of-symbols-used-in-this-guide
![](https://i.imgur.com/8UgEoXB.png)

Tier 2 and Tier 2
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/design/security_decisions/security_claims.html#design-security-claims
![](https://i.imgur.com/e2r0Ar0.png)

Missing allow and if
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/design/security_decisions/security_claims.html#design-security-claims
![](https://i.imgur.com/44I4CzA.png)
![](https://i.imgur.com/sSt4EYD.png

Link not working
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/system_manager/security_checklist.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/fOWPZSQ.png)

Tier 2 and tier 2
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/system_manager/security_checklist.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/iHIsYa6.png)

There are are
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/system_manager/security_checklist.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/r2f1jOD.png)

This one should be in the check above?
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/system_manager/security_checklist.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/PhvTutS.png)

Software ingress - anything about whitelisting software?
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/system_manager/security_checklist.html

Firewall controls - where is list of approved sites?
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/system_manager/security_checklist.html

No the
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/system_manager/administrator_guide.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/iCNy3Bm.png)

Unnaccented (thrice)
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/system_manager/administrator_guide.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/uV6236q.png)

Should be added _to_
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/system_manager/administrator_guide.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/WUId1uO.png)

Youused
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/system_manager/administrator_guide.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/2DrUI5r.png)

Data providers => provider's
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/system_manager/administrator_guide.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/mdw0ikF.png)

Formatting
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/index.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/RO4MGFG.png)

'secure Environment' reads weird
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_sensitivity_classification/sensitivity_tiers.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/iYoY8w8.png)

'absolute confidence' the repetition of this feels misleading if absolute confidence doesn't really exist...
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_sensitivity_classification/sensitivity_tiers.html

'weakly/strongly' are wet
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_sensitivity_classification/sensitivity_tiers.html

Work package descriptions seem not very clear - the caution is clearest
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_sensitivity_classification/classification_process.html

'Not currently support' - can we also provide alternatives for environments required for Tier 4?
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_sensitivity_classification/classification_process.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/8vMYY2N.png)

Workflow - simpler diagram is better for understanding, should be first? And clearly labeled
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_sensitivity_classification/classification_process.html

Abide to -> abide by
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_sensitivity_classification/unconsented_data.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/MiVNObw.png)

Uses
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_transfer/data_ingress.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/CF13eSy.png)

Are be the same
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_transfer/data_ingress.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/aWJPcQV.png)

attempt - should attempt
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_transfer/data_ingress.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/fxNS2iK.png)

Through what?
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_transfer/software_ingress.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/vTsptys.png)

Is => it
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_transfer/software_ingress.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/A2kgyEe.png)

DPR link not all encompassing
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_transfer/egress.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/LI6LFKt.png)

Capitalise tier & SRE
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_transfer/egress.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/QwpPMUv.png)

If disagreement should the highest be used (as with Egress) or dataset deleted (as with Ingress)?
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_transfer/egress.html

Decided -> decide
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_transfer/egress.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/xM1elfN.png)

So as -> so
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_transfer/egress.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/c1e22dG.png)

Some of the wording e.g. 'can be delivered' -> should it be stronger, e.g. 'should'
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_transfer/egress.html

Comma
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/security/overview.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/qON9YGz.png)

Ac something

Full stop
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/security/technical_controls.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/4IoFbYl.png)

Can -> should
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/security/technical_controls.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/sIfWlr2.png)

tier -> Tier (whole page)
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/security/technical_controls.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/XPmpp0m.png)

Ref not working
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/security/security_policies.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/6zW07XI.png)

Ref not working
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/design/security_decisions/security_defaults.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/uwWGCjc.png)

Equal not hyphen
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/design/certifications/risk_register.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/BC6frzg.png)


High security research environments
https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/security/technical_controls.html
![](https://i.imgur.com/xZnNUhT.png)