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## DSH Docs typos https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/index.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/UtDxzSq.png) https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/investigator/index.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/ZCV6Q3J.png) Should also include outputs in def of work package https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/project_manager/project_lifecycle.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/caTAopi.png) https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/project_manager/data_ingress.html# ![](https://i.imgur.com/kjiaBG3.png) https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/researcher/user_guide_guacamole.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/guJ76GM.png) Should highlight that you'll need to be able to receive calls later if you use phone option https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/researcher/user_guide_guacamole.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/jdVrZKK.png) Should also say 'You can try again by clicking "reconnect"' https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/researcher/user_guide_msrds.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/unzNfEl.png) 'Projects participants' => 'Project participants' https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/researcher/user_guide_msrds.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/6aDCtbk.png) 'done in done' https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/system_deployer/deploy_shm.html#explanation-of-symbols-used-in-this-guide ![](https://i.imgur.com/8UgEoXB.png) Tier 2 and Tier 2 https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/design/security_decisions/security_claims.html#design-security-claims ![](https://i.imgur.com/e2r0Ar0.png) Missing allow and if https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/design/security_decisions/security_claims.html#design-security-claims ![](https://i.imgur.com/44I4CzA.png) ![](https://i.imgur.com/sSt4EYD.png Link not working https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/system_manager/security_checklist.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/fOWPZSQ.png) Tier 2 and tier 2 https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/system_manager/security_checklist.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/iHIsYa6.png) There are are https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/system_manager/security_checklist.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/r2f1jOD.png) This one should be in the check above? https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/system_manager/security_checklist.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/PhvTutS.png) Software ingress - anything about whitelisting software? https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/system_manager/security_checklist.html Firewall controls - where is list of approved sites? https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/system_manager/security_checklist.html No the https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/system_manager/administrator_guide.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/iCNy3Bm.png) Unnaccented (thrice) https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/system_manager/administrator_guide.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/uV6236q.png) Should be added _to_ https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/system_manager/administrator_guide.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/WUId1uO.png) Youused https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/system_manager/administrator_guide.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/2DrUI5r.png) Data providers => provider's https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/roles/system_manager/administrator_guide.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/mdw0ikF.png) Formatting https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/index.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/RO4MGFG.png) 'secure Environment' reads weird https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_sensitivity_classification/sensitivity_tiers.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/iYoY8w8.png) 'absolute confidence' the repetition of this feels misleading if absolute confidence doesn't really exist... https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_sensitivity_classification/sensitivity_tiers.html 'weakly/strongly' are wet https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_sensitivity_classification/sensitivity_tiers.html Work package descriptions seem not very clear - the caution is clearest https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_sensitivity_classification/classification_process.html 'Not currently support' - can we also provide alternatives for environments required for Tier 4? https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_sensitivity_classification/classification_process.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/8vMYY2N.png) Workflow - simpler diagram is better for understanding, should be first? And clearly labeled https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_sensitivity_classification/classification_process.html Abide to -> abide by https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_sensitivity_classification/unconsented_data.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/MiVNObw.png) Uses https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_transfer/data_ingress.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/CF13eSy.png) Are be the same https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_transfer/data_ingress.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/aWJPcQV.png) attempt - should attempt https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_transfer/data_ingress.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/fxNS2iK.png) Through what? https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_transfer/software_ingress.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/vTsptys.png) Is => it https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_transfer/software_ingress.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/A2kgyEe.png) DPR link not all encompassing https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_transfer/egress.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/LI6LFKt.png) Capitalise tier & SRE https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_transfer/egress.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/QwpPMUv.png) If disagreement should the highest be used (as with Egress) or dataset deleted (as with Ingress)? https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_transfer/egress.html Decided -> decide https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_transfer/egress.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/xM1elfN.png) So as -> so https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_transfer/egress.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/c1e22dG.png) Some of the wording e.g. 'can be delivered' -> should it be stronger, e.g. 'should' https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/data_transfer/egress.html Comma https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/security/overview.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/qON9YGz.png) Ac something Full stop https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/security/technical_controls.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/4IoFbYl.png) Can -> should https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/security/technical_controls.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/sIfWlr2.png) tier -> Tier (whole page) https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/security/technical_controls.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/XPmpp0m.png) Ref not working https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/security/security_policies.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/6zW07XI.png) Ref not working https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/design/security_decisions/security_defaults.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/uwWGCjc.png) Equal not hyphen https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/design/certifications/risk_register.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/BC6frzg.png) High security research environments https://alan-turing-institute.github.io/data-safe-haven/v3.4.0/policies/security/technical_controls.html ![](https://i.imgur.com/xZnNUhT.png)