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title: White paper review
tags: [white paper, aeternity, review]

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# White paper review


I didn't do a thorough review of the white paper because I believe that the purpose of reading it is for me to understand Aeternity blockchain. The white paper truly gave me an overview of Aeternity. By reading it, I have an idea of how each part works together.

Some areas of the documentation need to be improved. For example, line 34 to 38 in the introduction section is not explanatory enough. Also, the white paper needs the touch of a technical writer as I believe that some things should be made obvious rather than inferred. For example, section 5.5 seems to infer that another user can pay the gas for a transaction I am making on Aeternity blockchain. This is a very cool feature that should be made obvious and not inferred from the explanation.

Since our main goal is to gain more users for Aeternity blockchain, our main focus should not be to improve the white paper. This can be done at leisure.

###### tags: `aeternity` `review` `white paper`
