Possible things to do for a next draft of TAoA * Define self-sovereignty * Define autonomy * Define extraction * Look at connections 3+4 * Maybe flip them in ordering? * Think about implementation road maps for everywhere (maybe briefer) ## Epilogue Notes COMMENT-SA: I'm not 100% happy with it, but it flows better now. I think the long list of types of memory detracts from what should be a conclusive piece. I would be tempted to cut them mostly or entirely. Generally, I think there are a lot of lists in this epilogue that could be shortened. The piece is maybe 2x-3x as long as it should be. But I didn't want to make a cut quite that dramatic. So, take a look at it as it is right now.