---
title: Feedback for Snack Club
tags: deck
---
# Feedback for Snack Club

The deck looks great in communicating communicating the 'vibes' and culture of Snack Club, as well as lends credibility to the folks behind the project. Given the current hype in GameFi, existing traction and credible team, this deck should do well during a presentation.

However, as a pre-read deck, the flow and presentation of information could be re-organised so it is easier to read and comprehend, helping to make the actual presentation more focused & effective.

I propose the following ordering to achieve that, see table below for the slide order
1. Narrative
2. Problem
3. Snack Club (Solution)
4. Differentiation
5. How it works
6. Traction
7. Team
8. Token
9. Launch Plans

Other than that, the initial comments I had are on the respective slides as follows.

| S/N | Slide | Remarks | Category |
| --- | --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- | -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- | ------------------ |
| 1 | Title | OK | - |
| 2 | Gaming + Crypto + Metaverse is the new narrative | OK | - |
| 3 | Emerging Markets are also poised to fuel P2E, but only if the right infrastructre is in place | Can we better map the Problem to Solutions? | Aesthetics |
| 4 | Axie Infinity, By the Numbers | Can we better link the page before to this? i.e. What are the problems that Axie has conquered, which implies that we'll do similarly? | Content |
| 5 | Enter Snack Club | Can we highlight some of the keywords, so its' easier to pick them up? | Aesthetics |
| 6 | Snack Club Lowers P2E Barriers to Entry, enabling gamers to thrive | OK | OK |
| 7 | But, does the industry need another gaming guild? | OK | OK |
| 8 | Absolutely! Metcalfe's Law | Metcalfe's Law is a good illustration, but can we drive home the point that the market is much bigger than Philippines? | Content/Aesthetics |
| 9 | How does it work? | OK | OK |
| 10 | Building Tools to Scale the New Ecosystem | OK | OK |
| 11 | Building Tools to Scale the New Ecosystem | OK | OK |
| 12 | We have a dependable Model | OK | OK |
| 13 | We already hit the market, gaining traction despite being in stealth mode | Generally OK, but wondering if we have more usage-related numbers here | OK |
| 14 | And an experienced team | OK | OK |
| 15 | Enter Loud | OK | OK |
| 16 | Loud & Snack Club | OK | OK |
| 17 | SNK Token | Does the token give holders exposure to Snack Club's assets? | Content |
| 18 | Launch Plans | OK | OK |
| 19 | Roadmap | OK | OK |