# Final website (front page) suggestions/edits

- This might look better on one line, or two if it completes the second line.
- **Create, participate, earn**
- **Create, participate, and earn**
- **The more content you create, the more you earn**
- **The more cool content you create, the more you earn**
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- Needs a period after "You"
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- Needs a period after "currency"
- People might not know what "fiat" means. I think you could just say **local currency** instead.
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- Needs consistency, whether we call them hashtags, #Tags, or #tags. We use #tag in places and #Tag in places. I think we should go with **#Tag** in all instances. Just be consistent.
- Needs a period after "app"
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- Here's what I mean. We used #Tag here, but #tag earlier. I think #Tag looks best.
- Needs period after "popularity"
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- These are two independent clauses so the proper punctuation would be **Express yourself. Let the world know who you are.**
- Even though this is a header, the period would be needed after "are" in this case, since we need the period after "yourself" and it would look weird without.
- A way to fix this issue would be to say "Express yourself **and** let the world know who you are"
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- Exact same issue here. Two independent clauses.
- **Tell your story and engage with your community**
- **Tell your story. Engage with your community.**
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- Again two independent clauses.
- **Get inspired and connect with the creators you vibe with**
- **Get inspired. Connect with the creators you vibe with.**
- Remove "that" in either instance.
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- Again two independent clauses.
- **Learn more about Vybit. Find our resources below.**
- **Learn more about Vybit by reading our resources below**
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- I think it's odd to say "Learn more about Vybit" for both the Whitepaper and the Pitch Deck. Need a different caption for one of them.
- "Pitch deck" should be **Pitch Deck**
- "Medium articles" should be **Medium Articles**
- "Download Pitch deck" should be **Download pitch deck**. Gotta be consistent with capitalization.
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- Poor structure here.
- **Infrastructure migration, dedicated server setup, bug fixing, and app maintenance**
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- Needs a comma
- **Relaunch, new Vybit branding, website, and roadmap**
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- Bad grammar
- **Have any questions?**
- Needs a period after "chats"
- I would add a little clarification about where our communities are and maybe include links.
- **If there are any questions that are not answered here or if you need clarification, feel free to ask in our [Telegram](https://) or [Discord ](https://)communities.**
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- Redundant and needs punctuation
- **Vybit is revolutionizing the union of social media and blockchain industries by incentivizing users for the value they generate and by creating a new forum for people to create, share, and connect.**
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- "Is Vybit a phone app" sounds very strange to me.
- **What platforms support Vybit?**
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- Needs punctuation
- **Vybit is a smartphone app and is supported on most smartphones and tablets, including Apple iOS (iOS 12 and higher, including iPads) and Android (SDK21 and higher).**
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- Needs punctuation.
- **Vybit earns VI tokens when advertisers run ads in the app. We keep 10% of that VI for operation and distributes 90% back to the users by sending it to the return address.**
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- So you used punctuation here but it's wrong and it might not be needed.
- Two independent clauses.
- **Join today. Earn Tomorrow.**
- **Join today and earn tomorrow**