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# About us page edits

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- Users doesn't need an apostrophe. Not possessive.
- **With Vybit users are rewarded for posting compelling content...**
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- Missing comma after "interactions" and "mechanism"
- "democratises" should be spelled "democratizes"
- Separate final sentence into two. Runs on too long. 
- slight rewording of final sentence.
- **Vybit democratizes the concept of earning money through social media by empowering every user to be financially rewarded for their engagement, interactions, and the popularity of the content they create. Through our rewards mechanism, users are rewarded based on their Impact score, which is a measure of engagement, interactions and popularity. This ensures that the total rewards distributed are shared proportionally with those driving the most engagement on the platform.**
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- Slight rewording of the first sentence.
- Change "coin" to "currency"
- Remove the word "their" in the second sentence. Must have been a typo.
- Separate sentences
- Capitalize Explore
- Change "favourite" to "favorite". I know this is the British spelling, but the American spelling is more familiar/recognizable.
- **Vybit users earn Vibes, our in-app currency (non-crypto), every day, for simply engaging with the app. Users can then share and redistribute their Vibes with anyone on the app, friends, or favorite content creators by pressing the "Vibe" button (equivalent to a "Like" on most platforms) on their videos This in turn encourages members to share compelling content and earn more Vibes. Users can also purchase additional Vibes to share with their favorite creators, engage with the community, or to get their content featured at the top of the explore feed.**
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- I'd recommend "revolutionizing" over "revolutionising". Again, more of a universal spelling. 
- Separate sentence. Runs on.
- "We are" should be "Vybit is"
- "crypto curious" should be "crypto-curious"
- **Vybit is revolutionizing the social media industry and creating a new place for people to create, share, connect and earn. Vybit introduces the concept of Layer Zero and provides a platform that will serve as an easy starting place for the crypto-curious. For many $VI will be the first cryptocurrency they own and Vybit will serve as an introduction to the endless possibilities in the blockchain/cryptocurrency world.**
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- **Infrastructure migration, dedicated server setup, bug fixing, and app maintenance**
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- add comma after "website"
- **Relaunch, new Vybit branding, website, and roadmap**
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- Would look better if ERC-20 was on one line
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- add comma after dApp
- **New features, Web 3.0 advertising dApp, and UI/UX**
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- Capitalize #Tag for consistency
- **Vybit #Tag NFT marketplace**
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- The punctuation here is wrong and might not be needed.
- Two independent clauses.
- **Join today. Earn Tomorrow.**
- **Join today and earn tomorrow**