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# MSc Dissertation Workshop I
## GV499
Prof. Kai Spiekermann
k.spiekermann@lse.ac.uk
[https://hackmd.io/@Spiekermann/MScDissertations#/](https://hackmd.io/@Spiekermann/MScDissertations#/)
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## Session Overview
* Timeline
* Rules and regulations
* The research topic, question, thesis, argument
* Manageability
* The right tools
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## Future Session (WT Week 2)
* The literature review
* Originality
* The writing process
* Sagely advice
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## Supervisor $\neq$ Advisor
* The departmental MSc convener will allocate dissertation supervisors based on
* your preferences
* your topic
* availability
* We generally recommend that you ask for supervision from the core Pol Theo team
* (though there can be plausible exceptions!)
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## The Winter and Spring Term
* This is the time to make use of your supervisors!
* Most supervisors will organize a workshop with their supervisees
* And offer individual meetings
* **Minimum goal: fix the core argument and structure**
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## A Word About the Summer Break
* Main goal: Write dissertations independently
* Two meetings with supervisors in so-called "supervision windows" (announced individually)
* Dissertation support sessions for more general advice also available
**DEADLINE: 19 AUGUST 2024**
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## Rules & Regulations
* Word limit: 10,000 words
* Includes footnotes/endnotes
* Excludes: cover page, table of contents, acknowledgements, abstract, bibliography, appendices
* No penalties for being under the limit
* but being significantly under limit might indicate a problem
* \>5% over limit may result in mark deductions -- please see MSc handbook
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## Referencing Guidelines
* Different systems allowed
* Must be consistent throughout
* Tools recommended:
* Zotero (open-source)
* Endnote (free for LSE students)
* More about tools below
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## Important Notes
* **Plagiarism** is an assessment offence
* **Self-plagiarism** is also an assessment offence
* You cannot use previously submitted material
* How are dissertations assessed?
* Examples of excellent dissertations available in Dissertation Library on GV499 Moodle
* We mark dissertations largely like summative essays
* but with more emphasis on success in presenting a compelling, independent argument
* Marking scheme provides guidelines
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## The Research Question
Every dissertation needs:
1. A topic
2. **One research question**
3. An answer to the research question ("thesis")
4. An argument supporting the answer
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## Example Breakdown
* Topic: "I want to work on environmental ethics"
* Research Question: "What are the conditions under which driving a gas-guzzling car is permissible?" :fuelpump:
* Thesis: "Driving a gas-guzzler is impermissible under X, Y and Z conditions"
* Argument: Premise 1, Premise 2, ..., leading to conclusion
NB: The research question need not be your thesis title
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## Finding Your Question
* Keep track of interesting class discussions
* Read broadly around topics
* Choose questions that:
* Interest you
* Play to your strengths :muscle:
* Allow contribution to literature
Be prepared for initial attempts to fail!
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## Question Types
Questions might address:
1. Current debate in political theory
2. Interpretive question about political text(s)/thinker(s)
3. Application of new theory/method to existing debate
4. Contemporary political issue
5. ...
Avoid causation questions (e.g.,. "How did the English civil war influence Hobbes's Leviathan?")
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Credit to Sam Bagg! (**NOT** advice!)

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## Research Questions and Motivation
A good research question is
* Relevant: we need an answer to that question
* It might contribute to solving a real-world problem
* ... or a theoretical problem
* Sufficiently challenging
* It should appeal to experts and (typically) lay people alike
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## Example A: "Equality of Welfare Defended"
* Tackles ongoing debate in political philosophy about the currency of justice
* Research question: _Is welfare the most defensible currency of justice?_
* Thesis: Yes, it is!
* Argument: many conceivable ways to go here
* Would most probably use analytic methods:
* Thought experiments
* Examples
* Reflective equilibrium
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## Example B: "Menkiti on Personhood"
* An interpretive dissertation, focusing on debates about one thinker in the literature
* Research question: _How should Ifeyanyi Menkiti’s communal ideal of personhood be understood and is is compatible with individual autonomy?_
* Thesis: His communal view of personhood does not entail, as is often assumed, a rejection of individual autonomy.
* Argument: partly close reading, partly appeal to principles of exegesis, partly bringing to bear new ideas for interpreting Menkiti
* Methods:
* Close analysis of primary and secondary texts
* Analytical
* Comparative
* Contextualist approaches
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## Example C: "Should Rhodes Fall?"
* A thesis motivated by a contemporary political issue
* Research Question: _Should tainted statues be removed from public view and on what grounds?_
* Thesis: Yes, they should if this is the most effective way to avoid degrading victims of colonialism.
* Argument: Will likely develop a theory about how commemoration can cause relational harms and domination, drawing on background theories of the wrongness of colonialism and how to address historical injustice
* Methods:
* An analysis of the wrongs involved
* A discussion of theories of domination and colonialism
* Real-world cases, reflective equilibrium
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## Many More Ways
* This only scratches the surface!
* I have not said anything about
* Critical theory and Ideologiekritik
* Social choice theory
* Comparative political theory
* and much more ...
* The type of arguments and methods vary by research question
* Have a look in the dissertation library
* And talk with your mentor and supervisor about this
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## Political Theory Focus
* The field is methodologically diverse
* Your Dissertation must fit within political theory
* Most political theory is from the armchair :seat:
* If you want to work empirically (ethnographic methods!), then
* you need to seek advice
* and be mindful that combining normative-theoretical and empirical work is _very_ hard
* Consult mentor/supervisor if uncertain
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## Manageability
* 10,000-word limit
* Choose answerable questions
* This often means addressing a smaller aspect than you first envisage :mag_right:
* Reference journal articles as models
* Ensure scope fits word/time constraints
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## Some Tools You Will Need I
* A reference manager
* Allows you to collect and correctly document sources right from the start
* Makes creating a consistent referencing system very easy
* I can show you Zotero if there is interest
* A word processor
* MS Word is free at LSE
* Familiarize yourself with headings/styles
* Footnotes
* Integration of your reference manager
* And the automatic creation of a Table of Content
* The spellchecker
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## Some Tools You Will Need II
* Alternative editing solutions:
* Different word processors
* LaTeX
* Markdown, etc
* Use something that works for you -- tools should not distract
* A note-taking system
* A literature search engine, like Google Scholar
* A reliable backup system: cloud and physical!
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## Artificial Intelligence
The departmental policy on using AI is clear:
_All the work students submit to the School is expected to be 100% their own. The use of Artificial Intelligence (AI) tools, such as ChatGPT, to help with any part of a student’s assessment is strictly prohibited._
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