+ Would like to see more compelling examples for the 30min drive
+ or maybe just get rid of the zipline example
+ too cartoony, the feel of the first and last 3 slides are more apt for investment types methinks
+ Add more exciting sports to adventures
+ Rafting, Scuba,
+ would center the the map on MetaCampus, Liberia doesn't need to be a focal point as this is focused on the adventures
+ Don't think that the location of nearby hotels is important? or include restaurants as well if you do so
+ More importand would be arial shots of property, talk about the boarding property more. That the parcels are boarded by farm land/nature to the east and south
+ whats the neigborhood like
+ shots of the beach, the massive almendra tree, the market, fruit trees, envisioned meeting space
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+ sounds like all meals on-site are gratis to memebers?
## Property Features page
+ what is the difference between this page and the Property advantages page? either show 1 after the other or differentiate the pages' purposes
## Metacampus Financial Projections page
+ what is brain trust? its the whale but no mention before this and there is no explanation of what it is
+ if cheffing is included would want to see that cost, same with the domesitic costs (laundry, cleaning, etc)