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title: 英文添削 9/14
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英文添削 9/14
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## Original
Nowadays I feel like I have been seeing a bunch of news in the U.S. that someone criticizes those who took a discriminatory action against certain race or ethnic group. It is not to say that this is one of the most deeply rooted social problems that human has been struggling to overcome in its very long history. Although racism is actually happening even in Japan, I think Japanese people are prone to regard it as something that they only studied in schools as a part of human history or that is nothing to do with their daily lives. American people probably be surprised at how naive Japanese people are on this matter. The problem here is that most of them don’t even notice that many Japanese Koreans, for example, have suffered from a kind of racism in Japan. I believe the more they come to acknowledge the fact, the more social discourse should be happened.

## Correction with Comments
Nowadays I feel like I have been seeing a bunch of news in the U.S. ~~that~~ **where** someone criticizes those who took a discriminatory action against certain race or ethnic group.
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⭐️thatの部分をwhereに。whereで文を繋げる方法はネイティブの文章ではよく行われます。このwhereはthe U.Sにかかっています
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It is not to say that this is one of the most deeply rooted social problems that human has been struggling to overcome in its very long history. Although racism is actually happening even in Japan, I think Japanese people are prone to regard it as something that they only studied in schools as a part of human history or that is nothing to do with their daily lives. 

American people probably **would** be surprised at how naive Japanese people are on this matter. 
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⭐️wouldをつけましょう
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The problem here is that most of them don’t even notice that many Japanese Koreans, for example, have suffered from a kind of racism in Japan. I believe the more they come to acknowledge the fact, the more social discourse should be happen~~ed~~**ing**.
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⭐️happenedをhappeningに変更
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==質問==
1. 最初の文のsomeone - をnewsにかけたい場合はどのように表現すれば良いでしょうか？

==回答==
1. whereが自然でも暗に繋いでいるのでこれがベストかと思います。通常でしたら、news which are about someone criticizes とwhich are aboutでも良さそうです

## After Correction
Nowadays I feel like I have been seeing a bunch of news in the U.S. where someone criticizes those who took a discriminatory action against certain race or ethnic group. It is not to say that this is one of the most deeply rooted social problems that human has been struggling to overcome in its very long history. Although racism is actually happening even in Japan, I think Japanese people are prone to regard it as something that they only studied in schools as a part of human history or that is nothing to do with their daily lives. American people probably would be surprised at how naive Japanese people are on this matter. The problem here is that most of them don’t even notice that many Japanese Koreans, for example, have suffered from a kind of racism in Japan. I believe the more they come to acknowledge the fact, the more social discourse should be happening.
