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title: 英文添削 9/12
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英文添削 9/12
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## Original
I believe paying in cash is just time consuming for both customers and salesclerks; they have to count it for themselves, and then hand it over physically. The more the sense of its inconvenience penetrates to human society, the more folks have come to use cashless payment technology like QR code payments in their daily lives without any difficulties. This can be seen not only in developed counties but also in emerging countries. People in the U.S. seldom use cash when ordering a cup of coffee at Starbucks, and no one uses cash nor credit card when using taxi in Beijing, to name a few. It is the case in Japan to certain extent, but I would say Japan is little bit behind in this trend. Sometimes they don’t accept your cashless payment with your smartphone in taxi, ramen restaurant, and other shops in the city even today in 2020.

## Correction with Comments
I believe paying in cash is ~~just~~ time consuming for both customers and salesclerks **.**
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⭐️口語ではjustが入っていてもいいが、文面では、justはなくてもよい
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~~; they~~ **When we use cash, we** have to count ~~it~~ **cash** ~~for themselves~~, and ~~then~~ **we directly** hand ~~it~~ over ~~physically~~.
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⭐️theyとitが誰のことか分かりにくいので再度、私たちがお金を使うときと〜とします。physicallyはhand over自体がフィジカルな動きなので直接とdirectlyに変えた方が意味が通ります
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The more ~~the sense of its inconvenience penetrates to~~ **convenient** human society **becomes**, the more ~~folks have come to use~~ cashless payment**s** ~~technology like~~ **, for example** QR code**s** ~~payments~~ **will be installed** in ~~their~~ **our** daily lives ~~without any difficulties~~.
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⭐️シンプルにしました
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This can be seen not only in developed counties but also in emerging countries. People in the U.S. ~~seldom~~ **hardly** use cash ~~when~~ ordering a cup of coffee at Starbucks ~~,~~ and no one uses cash ~~n~~or credit card**s** when using taxi in Beijing ~~, to name a few~~. It is the case in Japan to certain extent, but I would say Japan is **a** little bit behind in this trend. Sometimes ~~they don’t accept your~~ cashless payment**s** with ~~your~~ smartphone**s** **are not acceptable** in taxi, ramen restaurant, and other shops in the city even ~~today~~ in 2020.
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⭐️even today→evenのみ
⭐️nor→or
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## After Correction
I believe paying in cash is time consuming for both customers and salesclerks. When we use cash, we have to count cash, and we directly hand over. The more convenient human society becomes, the more cashless payments, for example QR codes will be installed in our daily lives. This can be seen not only in developed counties but also in emerging countries. People in the U.S. hardly use cash ordering a cup of coffee at Starbucks and no one uses cash or credit cards when using taxi in Beijing. It is the case in Japan to certain extent, but I would say Japan is a little bit behind in this trend. Sometimes cashless payments with smartphones are not acceptable in taxi, ramen restaurant, and other shops in the city even in 2020.
