英文添削 9/15 == ###### tags: `LearnFit` ## Original One of the most exciting part of learning English is that you can enjoy entertainments of all over the world. I personally love watching YouTube videos on which the cast of my favorite dramas appears and enjoying getting to know how different they are when for example taking some interviews. Your English enables you to access to this kind of a raw entertainment where otherwise you could have never reached. On the other hand, I believe that learning a foreign language itself is interesting because, whether you like it or not, that means you need to face the nature of your native tongue in the process. As your mother language is so close to you, its characteristics often have never been recognized objectively. For example, you might realize that Japanese language has a bunch of expressions for describing rain; they sometimes distinguish it depending on seasons, time, and scenes, which I think would be kind of surprising for foreign people. ## Correction with Comments One of the most exciting part**s** of learning English is that you can enjoy entertainment~~s~~ of all over the world. :::info ⭐️parts複数、entertainment不可算 ::: I personally love watching YouTube videos ~~on~~ **in** which the cast of my favorite dramas appear~~s~~ and enjoying ~~getting to know how different~~ **the contrast between the roles** they ~~are~~ **play and their true selves eg** when ~~for example taking some interviews~~ **being interviewed**. :::info ⭐️in which, how different →contrast ::: Your English enables you to access ~~to~~ this kind of a raw entertainment where otherwise you could have never reached. :::info ⭐️access ~~to~~ to不要 ::: On the other hand, I believe that learning a foreign language itself is interesting because, whether you like it or not, ~~that~~ **it** means you need to ~~face~~ **recognise** the nature of your native tongue in the process. :::info ⭐️whether you like it or not , it means you need to recognise the nature of your native tongue in the process. ::: 以下、修正箇所なし --- ==質問== 1. 最後のit means you need - の部分ですが、ここはitかthatかで迷った箇所です。that meansとするとどのように不自然かお聞きしたいです ==回答== 1. Itは置き換える、thatは、whichの使い方のthatもあるので紛らわしいからでしょうか ## After Correction One of the most exciting parts of learning English is that you can enjoy entertainment from all over the the world. YouTube videos in which the cast of my favourite dramas appear and enjoying the contrast between the roles they play and their true selves eg when being interviewed. Your English enables you to access this kind of a raw entertainment where otherwise you could have never reached. On the other hand, I believe that learning a foreign language itself is interesting because, whether you like it or not, it means you need to face recognise the nature of your native tongue in the process. As your mother language is so close to you, its characteristics often have never been recognized objectively. For example, you might realize that Japanese language has a bunch of expressions for describing rain; they sometimes distinguish it depending on seasons, time, and scenes, which I think would be kind of surprising for foreign people.