# Sphere - Kasukana Hisokana Tashikana Mirai (TV Size) [Insane]

00:15:099 (3,4) - 00:19:644 (3,4) - 00:24:008 (3,4) - 00:35:644 (3,4) - 00:39:826 (3,4) -
In my opinion this positioning of 2 1/2 sliders is used too often throughout your map. I would try to change the flow or rhythm in some of these sections so that they clearly stand out as different between each other since the song sounds different between many of these. A possible flow change would be making the second slider at a 90 degree angle compared to the first one, like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/13724125/4074 x

> ^ Good, but maybe add a rhythm or flow example?

00:18:917 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - playing this same rhythm after having just played it in 00:13:463 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - doesn’t fit for me since the song sounds different in these two sections. I would suggest looking more into 00:18:917 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this rhythm since the 1st and 2nd measures here are a bit different but represented with the same rhythm. x

00:24:008 (3,4) - I would use circles here to stress the instruments acting as a transition into the next phrase of the song.
Is this ok?

> ^ Good, although I think you can also talk about circle usage here and which parts of the song deserve more circles and where

00:24:735 (1,2,3,4) - this same rhythm as 00:18:917 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - is used again here although the vocals change in this section. I would suggest putting a 1/1 slider at 00:25:281 - to emphasize the vocal here and add some variation to the rhythm to stress the next phrase in the song. x

> ^ Would change "new phrase" to "next phrase"

00:33:463 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The rhythm used here is the same as the rhythm used just before at 00:32:008 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -. This is odd as the vocals in these two measures sound different, and as a result should be represented with a different rhythm. I suggest changing 00:34:553 (4) - to a 1/2 slider (delete 00:34:735 (5) - ) so that this calmer measure has a more simple rhythm than the other measure. x

> ^ Try adding example rhythm and reword it to make sure that the timestamp is at the beginning of your mod

00:34:917 (1,2,3,4) - this rhythm and note placement is already used in a previous measure at 00:23:281 (1,2,3,4) - . I would either use circles instead of the 1/2 sliders if transitioning into the next phrase or making the sliders not in opposite directions of each other. (as seen in the linked image in the timestamp at 00:15:099 - )
Is this ok?

> ^ Could be more specific with what you want here, e.g. rhythm suggestions, object placement advice, etc.

00:31:281 - Remove NC here because the rest of the map has NC at the downbeats and this one is on beat 3, which is not the downbeat. x

> ^ Good, although in your future mods maybe start with "Remove NC" since people use that more from what I've seen

01:06:190 (3) - the instruments and vocals are louder on the slider end than the slider head here. I would suggest ctrl+g on 01:06:008 (2,3) - so the weak beat 3 is now the slider end and the vocals after beat 3, on 01:06:372 - ,01:06:553 - , and 01:06:735 - are all circles. x

01:11:826 - I think that this vocal shouldn’t be in the middle of a slider since it is represented in other parts such as 01:04:008 (1,2) - . You could change it so that 01:11:644 - is a circle instead of a 1/1 slider and put the 1/1 slider on 01:11:826 - . x

> ^ I tried reading parts of this but it's really long, try simplifying it or breaking it up into two lines

01:14:190 (7) - this should be the NC instead of 01:14:553 - since this is the downbeat beginning the next phrase of the song. x

> ^ Could explain why this downbeat is significant, and/or why NC makes sense in terms of the map here

01:14:190 (7,2) - Since these two sliders are mirrors of each other I would adjust the directions on 01:14:553 (1,3) - so that they are also mirrors of each other. x

> ^ Fix grammar and typo

01:14:190 (7,1,2,3,1,2) - This follows the drums since the vocal at 01:15:553 - is ignored, but the strong drum at 01:16:008 - occurs on a slider end. I would suggest making 01:15:644 (1) - a 1/2 slider and adding a circle after it on 01:16:008 - so there is a clickable object on the strong drum. x

> ^ Timestamp needs to be at the beginning, avoid ambiguity in mods (i.e. avoid "to me it feels like" <insert objective thing here>), could change or remove "that repeat slider" since you already referenced it with the timestamp, otherwise it's not gramatically correct

01:17:644 (3) - This circle feels off as there is no drum here and the vocal is held here. I think making 01:17:463 - a 1/2 slider and then adding a circle on 01:17:735 - would better match the song in this section. x

01:19:281 - I would suggest making this ½ slider a 1/1 slider as it sounds very similar to the previous vocal at 01:18:553 - but doesn't have the same length slider.

> ^ I think the variation is fine here to transition the player into the next section of the song, having another 1/1 like this would mean that it's basically the same as the previous phrase, having 1/2 slider + circle has more impact... At 01:20:008 -, the new sounds in the song are in the foreground and the vocal is in the background, compared to at 01:18:553 - where some instruments don't play here