sweet ARMS - installation (Short Ver.) [Insane]

# sweet ARMS - installation (Short Ver.) [Insane] 00:09:445 (3,1) - spacing is huge here, shouldn't be this big for calmer section of song ✔ 00:10:840 (1) - shape of slider is bad. ✔ 00:14:468 (3,4,5,6) - flow throughout this is awkward ✔ 00:15:305 (1,2,1,2,3) - pattern isnt lead into well and the 1-2 positioning makes the 1-2-3 triangle flow really poorly. ✔ 00:17:398 (4) - make this spaced less as it doesn’t have the same drum as 00:17:817 (2) - and 00:18:235 (2) - , but is speced similar to them. ✔ > ^ Don't really understand your reasoning here but there is an issue with spacing here 00:22:980 (1) - this should be lower and more to the right for better flow. ✔ 00:22:980 (1,2) - spacing here feels too small. ✔ 00:24:654 (2,3,4) - lacks impact for transition. Also it feels like ctrl+g should be used here to follow the sound that 00:24:096 (1) - occurs on. ~ > ^ If you mean ctrl+g on 2-4, that would make the sliders off-beat, and I find the on-beats more significant here 00:25:910 (3) - This slider should probably be slanted slightly downward rather than upward for better flow. ✔ > ^ Maybe provide an example since right now I think both will play just as well since this is a jump anyway 00:27:863 (2) - Sliders initial direction feel like it should be more up left rather than up right ~ > ^ Not sure if that actually helps the map here 00:28:980 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - given the increased intensity in the song here the spacing should be larger. ✔ > ^ Depending on how you map it, yeah. I think low spacing and increasing it like this is OK, but there are lots of different things you can do as a mapper 00:30:375 (3) - should probably just be a repeat slider rather than this odd curve here. ✔ 00:29:817 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - in this phrase the upbeat in beat 2, 00:31:491 (2,3,4) - , is the toughest part but the upbeat in beat 4 is the most intense in the song and the rhythm/spacing should be adjusted to match this. ❌ > ^ Upbeat is the last beat of a measure 00:34:282 (1) - too much upward direction given the previous slider. ✔ 00:37:491 (1,2,3) - slider 1 doesn't really flow well in circles 2 and 3, to me the angle from 1 -> 2 -> 3 should be closer to a right angle than a straight line. ✔ 00:39:863 (5,6) - these should probably be slanted a bit clockwise in their selection field for better flow. ✔ > ^ That could work but I don't know how much you wanted to rotate this 00:40:840 (8,1) - I think the spacing here should be larger and 1 should be more to the right ✔ 00:43:770 (3) - this should be moved lower and maybe a bit to the right for better flow. ✔ 00:44:887 (7) - this should be lower and initially angled rightward and slightly down instead of rightward and slightly up. ✔ > ^ I think you got this part right but this whole pattern needs work 00:46:282 (3) - should be angle slightly down instead of slightly up to better flow with previous 2 notes and better flow into the following section. ✔ 00:48:235 (3,4,5) - This pattern is awkward to play, 4 should probably reverse selection and 5 should initially travel leftward instead. ✔ > ^ Don't say reverse selection just say ctrl+g 00:49:491 (6,7,8,1) - very large spacing here for nothing too special ✔ 00:50:747 (3,4) - to me slider 4 should start more directly right of 3 or above 3 as currently it feels awkward to play. ✔ 00:51:445 (5,6,7) - circle 6 here should be lower and to the right, or higher for better flow. ✔ 00:51:724 (7) - feels like this tried to follow vocals but it starts on the blue tick, not when this slider starts. ~ > ^ The simplification here makes sense since the vocalist starts singing this part around the 1/2, although the strongest part of the syllable isn't heard until the 1/4 00:52:142 (1,2,3) - slider 3 in this group feels way off, could be up and to the right of circle 2 or below circle 2, a lot of other positions than the current one. ~ > ^ Don't know what kind of pattern you'd go for here since you didn't mention changing the slider shape 00:53:259 (5) - this slider feels off given the flow before it. Should probably be either more down and to the left or way over to the right of circle 4. ~ > ^ Not sure if you need this since you suggested moving (3) so naturally the next few objects would need to be adjusted as well 00:53:677 (6,7,8) - Circle 7 here should be higher or lower and then slider 8 should be adjusted depending on the changes made to circle 7. ✔ 00:54:375 (1,2) - feels like too many waits in this measure. ~ > ^ Seems fine to me, although you could add a circle on the 1/2 between beats 2 and 3 00:54:933 (2) - this should be lower for better flow. ✔ 00:55:770 (4) - this should be higher for better flow. ✔ 00:56:049 (5,6,7,8) - this isn't bad, but i think it could be a bit more spaced or slight zigzagged for a bit more intensity. ~ > ^ That could work, but I don't know what kind of pattern you were thinking of since a zig-zag pattern here could be annoying to play if mapped the wrong way. 00:56:607 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This parts rhythm is fine, but the flow of many mirrored sliders are off as the second one often times needs more movement away from the previous slider head. Examples being 00:57:026 (2) - this slider is too high up, 00:58:142 (5) - this slider is too far to the left, etc. ✔ 01:05:538 (1,2) - measure 1 here follows vocals, 01:06:654 (4,5,6,1) - measure 2 deviates from vocals, 01:07:770 (3,4,5,6) - measure 3 doesn’t go back to vocals, 01:08:887 (1,2) - but then measure 4 does. ✔ This order of following/not following vocals doesn't make sense, if anything the deviation with more circles should be on measures 2 and 4, or just measure 4. ✔ Measure 4 in this section does use 2 circles on upbeat to add variation as the first 3 measures use a ½ slider. ✔ More flow and intensity issues throughout the rest of the map ✔ Also the nc’s throughout this song occur kinda all over the place and need to be redone. ✔