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# Drama


### Scene 2
 Gerda should grab Kai by the shoulder, and immediately takes her hands off because of the cold
 
**I AGREE**
 
### Scene 3 
The "That goes to your heart" and "That goes to your mind" should swap order.

**THE ORDER IS FINE AS THE MIND LEADS TO HIM FORGETTING HIS PAST. EITHER ORDER IS FINE. WE CAN EXPERIMENT**

### Scene 4
The river part should be rewrite as following
```
Gerda: "Is it true? Have you taken Kai?"
River: "Not I, Not I...."
Gerda: "Oh! I wish I could understand, River....."
...
Gerda: "Maybe if I go to the middle of the river, I could hear the river more clearly!"
Birds: "That must be it!"
River: "There's a small boat over there."
...
** THE SCENE IS COMPLEX AND THERE WILL BE A
LARGE PIECE OF BLUE MATERIAL SO THERE WILL BE NO 
WHERE FOR HER TO GO. IN ALL HONESTY, I AM NOT A 
FAN OF THIS PART OF THE SCENE**


The birds should get a little closer to 
The witch should lead Gerda to the opposite side of the stage, and turn around to shoo the birds.

** I LIKE THIS IDEA. LET'S HAVE ONE OR TWO OF 
**THE BIRDS APPROACH HEREKSI.**

### Scene 5
Thr roses shouldn't wave when the Gerda says "Hello flowers."
** THIS IS THEATRICAL NOT LOGICAL**

Lost in the dream world doesn't make any sense, because the roses just answered every question gerda throws at them.
**SEE ABOVE**

The birds should go in circles when asking "Which way"
**THEY ADDED THIS IN THEIR EXIT**

### Scene 6
The young should not be a women so frivolous. She should profe Lady Stum wrong. She should be the one that says "We should take more time and get to know each other." Instead of just for the wealth and for political reasons.
** YOU ARE MISSING THE COMEDIC CONTEXT**

And even if we want to keep the script, the lady as a princess from another land shouldn't be dressing shabby, or have a messy hair. There for the scene with the guard doesn't make sense.
**LADY STUM DESCRIBES THEM AS 'SAVAGES' REMEMBER
THAT DIFFERENT PLACES HAVE DIFFERENT BEAUTY
IDEAS**

And a princess from another kingdom shouldn't be here within a matter of seconds. The first day no one pass and the second day no one pass shouldn't be deleted.
** I DISAGREE - THIS IS THEATER AND AGAIN THE 
SPEED OF HER ARRIVAL ADDS TO THE FUNNINESS OF
THE SCENE**

The young lady should go "Ah! Kai, I have heard of him! He was taken by the snow queen to"
** WE CAN'T GIVE THE AUDIENCE TOO MUCH AS THAT
IS THE PURPOSE FOR SCENE 8**

### Scene 7

The robber dragging the reinder scene doesn't make scene, because he was chained up all the time, how did they drag it?

**THIS WILL WORK BETTER WHEN WE HAVE THE PROP
AND COSTUME**

Anthony, your observations are great.**


