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> Resource: [Hamas seeks 'complete halt' to war in Gaza proposal response](https://www.bbc.com/news/articles/cv225l8l7jzo)
> [time=12th Jun. 2024]

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## Archie
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## Azura
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War seems far away from us, but is alaways happens somewhere in the world. The conflcit between Israelis and Palestinians has been going on for a long time. Because of the war, the residents were forced from thier settlement and held hostage by the military even. The peolple are innocent, so I hope the ceasefire deal will take effect as soon as possible and keep peace permanently.
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## Bessy
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    Actually, this is not the first time a war has erupted in Gaza, but it must be an unprecedented and deadliest attack, as it has killed thousands in the Palestinian territory. Israel and the Palestinian group Hamas have been at war since October 7, 2023. On the morning of October 7, waves of Hamas gunmen stormed across Gaza's border into Israel, killing about 1,200 people. Hamas also fired thousands of rockets. Those killed included children, the elderly. Hamas took more than 250 others to Gaza as hostages.
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## Gary
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Israel and Palestin have a really complicated relationship for century. I have a pessimistic view on the ceasefire requirement. According to Israel refuse to let Palestin join U.N., we can see how tough of their attitude. To be fair, I think Israel has been taken too far for Hamas assault. At this time, their revenge is just become a violence move.
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## Janice
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<Personal leave>
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## Karen
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## Vincent :fireworks: 
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     Within these years, we can horrifying observe that the world is not that pease than before. Numerous conflicts break out underneath the hypocritical peaseful situations. Since the Ukrainian-Russian War to Israel-Palestine Conflict, which is the primary background of the artile, it seems human beings are tripping over the same stone twice to history. 
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- Spelling error: peace [name=Bessy]
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