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title: 'Renders V2: second feedback round'

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# Renders V2: Feedback round #2

Hi Gisela, thank you again for the renders. I have sent them to Peter and Inge and received the following feedback:

## Render 1

![renders_v2_1 Large.jpeg](https://hackmd.io/_uploads/Sk7WC6EXa.jpg)

OK 

## Render 2

![renders_v2_2 Large.jpeg](https://hackmd.io/_uploads/HJkZi0Vm6.jpg)

![Screenshot 2023-11-05 at 10.15.24.png](https://hackmd.io/_uploads/r1W3aC4mp.png)
![Screenshot 2023-11-05 at 09.10.09.png](https://hackmd.io/_uploads/BJHjFRNXT.png)
![Screenshot 2023-11-06 at 16.45.41.png](https://hackmd.io/_uploads/SyrO9tL7p.png)

- remove curtain in window atelier
- concrete sits flush with the wooden panelling (panelling and concrete in the same plane)
- concrete slab is an L-shape, same as the concrete slab above the garage door
- the sliding window is 10cm behind panelling, so it can slide in behind it
- the height of the bathroom panel should be 90cm (identical to the ones in the atelier), right now it is too high


## Render 3

![renders_v2_3 Large.jpeg](https://hackmd.io/_uploads/SyLE1gHQT.jpg)


- remove the closest chimney

![verticale-houten-latten-garagedeur.jpg](https://hackmd.io/_uploads/ryfPkeBm6.jpg)


- garage needs vertical panelling (you can use the same panelling as the ones used for our bedroom/bathroom) - the panelling is vertical, but it's divided in horizontal sections (which can be drawn by a small horizontal line, but not necessary)


![Screenshot 2023-11-05 at 11.28.04.png](https://hackmd.io/_uploads/rygp1eB7p.png)

![Screenshot 2023-11-05 at 11.27.54.png](https://hackmd.io/_uploads/rykjJxSm6.png)

- the concrete slab should be pushed inwards 20cm. It's an L-shape, same as the conrete slabs at the bathroom/bedroom. This is super important because it's one of the only changes visible from the street. The same goes for the concrete in the bathroom/bedroom.

## Chimneys

There are 3 chimneys, and we are removing one of them. We are keeping #1 and #2, we will remove #3. It's a detail but they have to be positioned correctly in the renders, which is not always the case.

![DSC_6901 Large.jpeg](https://hackmd.io/_uploads/ryrCMlSQp.jpg)