# Renders V2: Feedback round #2

Hi Gisela, thank you again for the renders. I have sent them to Peter and Inge and received the following feedback:

## Render 1


OK

## Render 2



- remove curtain in window atelier
- concrete sits flush with the wooden panelling (panelling and concrete in the same plane)
- concrete slab is an L-shape, same as the concrete slab above the garage door
- the sliding window is 10cm behind panelling, so it can slide in behind it
- the height of the bathroom panel should be 90cm (identical to the ones in the atelier), right now it is too high

## Render 3


- remove the closest chimney


- garage needs vertical panelling (you can use the same panelling as the ones used for our bedroom/bathroom) - the panelling is vertical, but it's divided in horizontal sections (which can be drawn by a small horizontal line, but not necessary)



- the concrete slab should be pushed inwards 20cm. It's an L-shape, same as the conrete slabs at the bathroom/bedroom. This is super important because it's one of the only changes visible from the street. The same goes for the concrete in the bathroom/bedroom.

## Chimneys

There are 3 chimneys, and we are removing one of them. We are keeping #1 and #2, we will remove #3. It's a detail but they have to be positioned correctly in the renders, which is not always the case.