# Renders v2 feedback

Hi Gisela, first of all I am very pleased with the result of the renders. The first permit got denied, so we hope that by adding your renders to the second proposal, and making some changes, we can convince them to grant us the permit.

This is also why I will probably want to iterate on it a couple of times. Peter and Inge are not available this week, so my plan is to iterate on it once or twice (maybe) and then send it to them. They have to confirm it.

## Render 1

I think this is close to perfect. The only change I think I want you to make is to make the chimneys taller. Especially the chimney on the right should be taller and slimmer. The chimneys are important because they put the house in proportion:


## Render 2

Pool is good for me, will have to check with Peter and Inge. All other changes are good for me to. There are some things I want to ask though.

One remark we got is about the windows. The windows on the east side and west side (so my working area (atelier) and our bath room). We have new versions now that are less modern, and are closer to the old style.

On the picture below you will see the latest version. Instead of having two big windows with wood panelling in the middle, we will have more wood panelling. The sliding window will be less wide, and there will be small rectangular windows with musquito netting...


The idea is to make it look more like the image below, and stay true to the old style:


**Now my question:** is it possible to add this to the render, but also slightly change the angle so we see more of the west wing? Right now we only see one window and the panelling, it would be good if we would use a different angle so we see everything.

The windows on the east wing will also change. The east wing is the view if you look at my working area standing on the street:


If you look closely you will see that on the left hand side, the window does not go from ceiling to ground... it is a detail but on render 2, if you look through the window maybe we can render this panneling. This is the detail I am talking about:


## Render 3


This is better than I expected! Great work. This render is very important for us, because it shows them that the view from the street won't drastically change. This is a picture of what it should mimic:


Can we make it look more than how it is in real life. I would like to propose:

- can we make the wall surrounding the plants a big taller
- can we add bushes against the wall of the atelier (like on the pic)
- can we re-add the horizontal concrete on the top of the garage, the garage panelling is really good.
- the dimensions seem off, I have enclosed a detail that has some more details, from the street to the atelier is about 12m, from there it is another 12m to the front door, does your render use the right dimensions?
- in front of the gate, there are trees that we are keeping, it looks like it's 4 trees, can you add these to the render?


Another minor detail, right next to the garage, on the right hand side, there is a small corner where you can park bikes. On the picture below you can hardly see it, but there is a brick wall:


it's a detail but it shows we are not removing it... can you add it?

Another detail, can we render the highlighted areas as grass?